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I drew near a black girl, alluring

ูˆุฒู†ุฌูŠุฉ ุฌุงุฐุจุช ุฌุงู†ุจ ุณุฑู‡ุง

1. I drew near a black girl, alluring,
Seeking to fathom the heart of her mystery;

ูก. ูˆุฒูŽู†ุฌููŠุฉู ุฌูŽุงุฐุจุชู ุฌูŽุงู†ูุจูŽ ุณูุฑู‘ูู‡ูŽุง
ูˆู…ูŽูŠุณููˆุฑูู‡ูŽุง ู…ูุณุชูŽูู‡ูู…ุงู‹ ูƒูู†ู‡ูŽ ุณูุฑู‘ูู‡ูŽุง

2. I asked her about her home, and she smiled,
As if to reveal her heart was to unveil its secret.

ูข. ููŽุณูŽุงุกูŽู„ุชูู‡ูŽุง ุนูŽู† ุฏูŽุงุฑูู‡ูŽุง ููŽุชูŽุจูŽุณู‘ูŽู…ูŽุช
ููŽุฑูู…ุชู ู„ูููŽู‡ู…ูู‰ ุณูุฑู‘ูŽู‡ูŽุง ูƒูŽุดููŒ ุณูุฑู‘ูู‡ูŽุง

3. I saw her walking, dragging her mystery,
Yet the tugging but increased the pull at my heart.

ูฃ. ููŽุณูŽุง ูŠูŽุฑุชูู‡ูŽุง ุชูŽู…ุดูู‰ ุชูุฌูŽุฑู‘ูุฑู ุณูุฑู‘ูŽู‡ูŽุง
ูˆููŠ ุฌูŽุฑู‘ูู‡ู ููŠ ุงู„ู‚ูŽู„ุจู ุฑูŽูุนูŒ ู„ูุฌูŽุฑู‘ูู‡ูŽุง

4. โ€œMy home,โ€ said she, โ€œis above all so fair;
Sweet to reside in is its dwelling place.

ูค. ููŽู‚ูŽุงู„ูŽุช ู„ูŽุฏูŽุงุฑูู‰ ุฃุญุณูู†ู ุงู„ุฏู‘ููˆุฑู ูƒูู„ู‘ูู‡ุง
ูˆูŠูŽุญุณูู†ู ุงู„ุฅุณุชู‚ูŽุฑุงุฑู ููŠ ู…ูุณุชูŽู‚ูŽุฑู‘ูู‡ูŽุง

5. Hot is it longing for who yearns for its heat,
And sweet for who seeks rest to repose in its peace.โ€

ูฅ. ู„ูŽุฐููŠุฐูŒ ู„ูู…ูŽู†ูŽ ุฑูŽุงู…ูŽ ุงู„ุญูŽุฑูŽุงุฑูŽุฉูŽ ุญูŽุฑู‘ูู‡ูŽุง
ูˆู…ูŽู† ุฑูŽุงู…ูŽ ู‚ูุฑู‘ุงู‹ ูŠูŽุณุชูŽู„ูุฐู‘ู ุจูู‚ูุฑู‘ูู‡ูŽุง

6. By night it is moonlit, starry and bright,
The fairest of meadows all moist with its dew;

ูฆ. ู„ู‡ุง ุงู„ูŠูŽู„ูู‰ู‘ูŒ ู…ูุณุจูŽูƒูุฑู‘ูŒ ูˆุฃุดู†ูŽุจูŒ
ุฃุบูŽุฑู‘ู ุดูŽุชููŠุชู ุงู„ู†ู‘ูŽุจุชู ู…ูุฒุฑู ุจูุฏูุฑู‘ูู‡ูŽุง

7. I lingered about that home, blissful and gay,
Delighting in nothing save roaming its shades.

ูง. ููŽุธูŽู„ุชู ุจูุชูู„ูƒูŽ ุงู„ุฏู‘ูŽุงุฑู ุฃู„ู‡ููˆ ูˆู…ูู‚ู„ูŽุชูู‰
ุชูุฑูŽุฏู‘ูŽุฏู ููŠ ู„ูŽูŠู„ูŠู‘ูู‡ูŽุง ูˆุฃูŽุบุฑู‘ูู‡ูŽุง

8. Until the approach of some boys of her clan,
Put fear in my heart of the peril of harm.

ูจ. ุฅูู„ู‰ ุฃู† ุฏูŽู†ูŽุฃ ุฅุชูŠูŽุงู†ู ุจูŽุนุถู ุนููŠูŽุงู„ูู‡ูŽุง
ูˆู…ูŽู‡ู…ูŽุง ุฃุชูŽู‰ ุชูŽุฎุดูŽ ุจูŽูˆูŽุงุฏูุฑูŽ ุถูุฑู‘ูู‡ูŽุง

9. I greeted her then, and with heart hot as fire,
She rose to her feet in a swirl of her robe.

ูฉ. ููŽูˆูŽุฏู‘ูŽุนุชูู‡ุง ูˆุงู„ู‚ูŽู„ุจู ูŠุบู„ูŠ ุตูŽุจูŽุงุจูŽุฉู‹
ูˆู‚ูŽุงู…ูŽุช ู„ูุชูŽูˆุฏููŠุนูู‰ ุฅู„ูŽู‰ ุฌูŽู†ุจู ูƒูŽุฑู‘ูู‡ูŽุง