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I imagined a clear quarter by the crossing,

ุชูˆู‡ู…ุช ุฑุจุนุง ุจุงู„ู…ุนุจุฑ ูˆุงุถุญุง

1. I imagined a clear quarter by the crossing,
Yet its two hills refused today to do anything but shift.

ูก. ุชูŽูˆูŽู‡ู‘ูŽู…ุชู ุฑูŽุจุนุงู‹ ุจูุงู„ู…ูŽุนุจู‘ูุฑู ูˆุงุถูุญุงู‹
ุฃูŽุจูŽุช ู‚ูŽุฑู‘ูŽุชุงู‡ู ุงู„ูŠูŽูˆู…ูŽ ุฅูู„ู‘ุง ุชูŽุฑุงูˆูŽุญุง

2. A dark, hazel-colored cloud settled upon it,
And flickering as if it contained lanterns.

ูข. ุฃูŽุฑูŽุจู‘ูŽุช ุนูŽู„ูŽูŠู‡ู ุฑุงุฏูŽุฉูŒ ุญูŽุถุฑูŽู…ููŠู‘ูŽุฉูŒ
ูˆูŽู…ูุฑุชูŽุฌูุฒูŒ ูƒูŽุฃูŽู†ู‘ูŽ ููŠู‡ู ุงู„ู…ูŽุตุงุจูุญุง

3. When it descended upon Karbala, it likely
Allowed the fresh jujube trees passage beneath it, yet not the wailers,

ูฃ. ุฅูุฐุง ู‡ููŠูŽ ุญูŽู„ู‘ูŽุช ูƒูŽุฑุจูŽู„ุงุกูŽ ููŽู„ูŽุนู„ุง
ููŽุฌูŽูˆุฒูŽ ุงู„ุนูุฐูŽูŠุจู ุฏูˆู†ูŽู‡ุง ููŽุงู„ู†ูŽูˆุงุจูุญุง

4. And its intention became evident from your intention, and it consented
To the slanderers, the gloating backbiters, and the impudent.

ูค. ูˆูŽุจุงู†ูŽุช ู†ูŽูˆุงู‡ุง ู…ูู† ู†ูŽูˆุงูƒูŽ ูˆูŽุทุงูˆูŽุนูŽุช
ู…ูŽุนูŽ ุงู„ุดุงู†ุฆูŠู†ูŽ ุงู„ุดุงู…ูุชุงุชู ุงู„ูƒูŽูˆุงุดูุญุง

5. So say to Layla, โ€œWill you compensate a regretful man
Who jokingly uttered divorce, yet has an opportunity to return?โ€

ูฅ. ููŽู‚ูˆู„ุง ู„ูู„ูŽูŠู„ู‰ ู‡ูŽู„ ุชูุนูŽูˆู‘ูุถู ู†ุงุฏูู…ุงู‹
ู„ูŽู‡ู ุฑูŽุฌุนูŽุฉูŒ ู‚ุงู„ูŽ ุงู„ุทูŽู„ุงู‚ูŽ ู…ูู…ุงุฒูุญุง

6. If she says โ€œNo,โ€ then say to her, โ€œYes,
Do you not fear the slaughtering slave girls?โ€

ูฆ. ููŽุงูู† ู‡ููŠูŽ ู‚ุงู„ูŽุช ู„ุง ููŽู‚ูˆู„ุง ู„ูŽู‡ุง ุจูŽู„ู‰
ุฃูŽู„ุง ุชูŽุชู‘ูŽู‚ูŠู†ูŽ ุงู„ุฌุงุฑููŠุงุชู ุงู„ุฐูŽูˆุงุจูุญุง