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I would lay down my life for the one who said, while cupping his hand:

أفدي الذي قال وفي كفه

1. I would lay down my life for the one who said, while cupping his hand:
The one I drink from is like this.

١. أفدي الذي قالَ وفي كَفِّهِ
مثلُ الذي أشرَبُ من فيهِ

2. The roses have ripened in my cheeks.
I said: My mouth will pluck them with a kiss.

٢. الوردُ قد أَينَعَ في وَجنتي
قُلتُ فمي باللَّثمِ يَجِنيهِ