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With it the flowers tidy up their beds

ูˆุฑูˆุถ ุจู‡ ุงู„ุฃุฒู‡ุงุฑ ุจูŠู† ู…ู†ุธู…

1. With it the flowers tidy up their beds
And lastly scattered here, Iโ€™m cheered instead

ูก. ูˆูŽุฑูŽูˆุถ ุจูู‡ู ุงู„ุฃูŽุฒู‡ุงุฑู ุจูŽูŠู†ูŽ ู…ู†ุธู‘ู…
ูˆูŽุขุฎุฑ ู…ูŽู†ุซูˆุฑ ุจูู‡ู ุตูุฑุช ู…ูŽุณุฑูˆุฑุง

2. Within it prose seems organized and neat
And verse unfettered flows, this canโ€™t be beat

ูข. ูููŠู‡ ุฃุฑู‰ ุงู„ู…ู†ุซูˆุฑ ูŠุจุฏูˆ ู…ู†ุธู…ุงู‹
ูˆููŠู‡ ุฃุฑู‰ ุงู„ู…ู†ุธูˆู… ู„ุง ุดูƒ ู…ู†ุซูˆุฑุง