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The rhyming rests on me when I compose it

ุนู„ูŠ ู†ุญุช ุงู„ู‚ูˆุงููŠ ุญูŠู† ุฃู†ุธู…ู‡ุง ูˆุฅู†ู‡ุง

1. The rhyming rests on me when I compose it
Yet it is unmatched by pearlsโ€™ patterning

ูก. ุนูŽู„ูŽูŠู‘ูŽ ู†ูŽุญุชู ุงู„ู‚ูŽูˆุงููŠ ุญูŠู†ูŽ ุฃูŽู†ุธูู…ูู‡ุง
ูˆูŽุฅูู†ู‘ู‡ุง ู„ุง ุชูุถุงู‡ูŠ ู†ุธู…ูŽู‡ุง ุงู„ุฏู‘ูุฑูŽุฑู

2. I do not create in it sense for the fool
I am not to blame if cows do not comprehend

ูข. ูˆูŽู„ูŽุณุชู ุฃุฎู„ู‚ ููŽู‡ู…ุงู‹ ู„ู„ุบูŽุจูŠู‘ู ุจูู‡ุง
ูˆูŽู…ุง ุนูŽู„ูŠู‘ูŽ ุฅูุฐุง ู„ูŽู… ุชูŽูู‡ูŽู…ู ุงู„ุจู‚ูŽุฑู