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A friend whose path I crossed one feast day

ู„ูŠ ุตุฏูŠู‚ ุทุฑู‚ุชู‡ ูŠูˆู… ุฌู…ุน

1. A friend whose path I crossed one feast day
When all were gathered and hunger held sway

ูก. ู„ูŠ ุตูŽุฏูŠู‚ูŒ ุทุฑูŽู‚ุชู‡ู ูŠูŽูˆู…ูŽ ุฌูŽู…ุนู
ูˆูŽุงูุญุชููุงู„ู ูˆูŽู…ูŽู† ุฏูŽุนุงู‡ู ุญูŽุตูˆู„ู

2. They complained of hunger and thirst so dire
I was busy with talk and paid no heed there

ูข. ูŠูŽุชูŽุดูƒู‘ูˆู†ูŽ ุดูุฏู‘ูŽุฉูŽ ุงู„ุฌูˆุนู ูˆูŽุงู„ุฏุง
ุนูŠ ู„ูŽู‡ูู… ุนูŽู† ู…ูŽู‚ุงู„ูŽู‡ู… ู…ูŽุดุบูˆู„ู

3. Then food was served and bellies did yearn
The guests were famished, thirst made them burn

ูฃ. ุซูู…ู‘ูŽ ู†ุงุฏูŽูŠุชู ุจูุงู„ุทูŽุนุงู…ู ูˆูŽู‚ูŽุฏ ูƒุง
ุฏูŽุช ู†ูููˆุณู ุงู„ุญูุถู‘ุงุฑู ุฌูˆุนุงู‹ ุชูŽุณูŠู„ู

4. Can I glimpse you, and thereby quench my fire?
Quoth he โ€œNay for a bolt locks my desire

ูค. ู‡ูŽู„ ุฅูู„ู‰ ู†ูŽุธุฑูŽุฉู ุฅูู„ูŽูŠูƒูŽ ุณูŽุจูŠู„ู
ูŠูุฑูˆูŽ ู…ูู†ู‡ุง ุงู„ุตูŽุฏู‰ ูˆูŽูŠูุดููŽ ุงู„ุบูŽู„ูŠู„ู

5. The key is lost and access denied evermoreโ€

ูฅ. ู‚ุงู„ูŽ ู‡ูŽูŠู‡ุงุช ุฏูˆู† ุฐู„ููƒูŽ ู‚ููู„ูŒ
ุถุงุนูŽ ู…ููุชุงุญูู‡ู ูˆูŽู…ูŽู†ุนูŒ ุทูŽูˆูŠู„ู