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I have abandoned the sweetest of my joys and drink

ุฌุงู†ุจุช ุฃุทูŠุจ ู„ุฐุชูŠ ูˆุดุฑุงุจูŠ

1. I have abandoned the sweetest of my joys and drink
And after you left, willingly, my friends too

ูก. ุฌุงู†ูŽุจุชู ุฃูŽุทูŠูŽุจูŽ ู„ูุฐู‘ูŽุชูŠ ูˆูŽุดูŽุฑุงุจูŠ
ูˆูŽู‡ูŽุฌูŽุฑุชู ุจูŽุนุฏูŽูƒูŽ ุนุงู…ูุฏุงู‹ ุฃูŽุตุญุงุจูŠ

2. So if I wrote to glorify my watcherโ€™s eyes
With the beauty of your words, Iโ€™d find no answer

ูข. ููŽุฅูุฐุง ูƒูŽุชูŽุจุชู ู„ููƒูŽูŠ ุฃูู†ูŽุฒู‘ูู‡ูŽ ู†ุงุธูุฑูŠ
ููŠ ุญูุณู†ู ู„ูŽูุธููƒูŽ ู„ูŽู… ุชูŽุฌูุฏ ุจูุฌูŽูˆุงุจู

3. If you deny my humiliation and fawning
And the wasting of my body and prolonging of my torment

ูฃ. ุฅูู† ูƒูู†ุชูŽ ุชูู†ูƒูุฑู ุฐูู„ู‘ูŽุชูŠ ูˆูŽุชูŽุฐู‘ู„ู‘ูู„ูŠ
ูˆูŽู†ูุญูˆู„ูŽ ุฌูุณู…ูŠ ูˆูŽุงูู…ุชูุฏุงุฏูŽ ุนูŽุฐุงุจูŠ

4. Then look upon this body I have clothed
To the viewers, in many robes

ูค. ููŽุงูู†ุธูุฑ ุฅูู„ู‰ ุจูŽุฏูŽู†ูŠ ุงู„ู‘ูŽุฐูŠ ู…ูˆู‘ูŽู‡ุชูู‡ู
ู„ูู„ู†ู‘ุงุธูุฑูŠู†ูŽ ุจููƒูŽุซุฑูŽุฉู ุงู„ุฃูŽุซูˆุงุจู