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I have a friend who says to the insistent questioner:

لي صديق يقول للسائل المغتر

1. I have a friend who says to the insistent questioner:
Turn away, let the one who gave fall

١. لي صَديقٌ يَقولُ لِلسّائِلِ المُغ
تَرِّ لا دَرَّ دَرُّ مَن أَعطاكا

2. Draw his water, so the neighbor said to him:
Give me a drink, I am ransomed for you

٢. زَمِّلوا ماءَهُ فَقالَت لَهُ الجا
رَةُ هاتِ اِسقِني جُعِلتُ فِداكا

3. A boy said regarding love: Cup after cup
And remove the two cloaks, this and that

٣. قالَ صُبّي في الحُبِّ كوزاً بِكوزٍ
وَأَزيحي البُردَينِ هذا وَذاكا