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I have a cousin, four years old

ู„ูŠ ุงุจู† ุนู… ุจุงู„ุบ ุฃุฑุจุนุง

1. I have a cousin, four years old
Or less by a few months untold

ูก. ู„ููŠูŽ ุงุจู’ู†ู ุนูŽู…ู‘ู ุจูŽุงู„ูุบูŒ ุฃูŽุฑู’ุจูŽุนุงู‹
ู…ูู†ู’ ุนูู…ุฑูู‡ู ุฃูŽูˆู’ ุฏููˆู†ูŽู‡ูŽุง ุฃูŽุดู’ู‡ูุฑูŽุง

2. Fair of face, golden hair
Lips like a treasure, gems they bear

ูข. ุทูŽู„ู’ู‚ู ุงู„ู…ูุญูŽูŠู‘ูŽุง ุดูŽุนู’ุฑูู‡ู ู…ูุฐู’ู‡ูŽุจูŒ
ูˆูŽุซูŽุบู’ุฑูู‡ู ูƒูŽู†ู’ุฒูŒ ุญูŽูˆูŽู‰ ุฌูŽูˆู’ู‡ูŽุฑูŽุง

3. Strutting proudly like a soldier
Yet no one loves a child so bold

ูฃ. ูŠูŽุฎู’ุชูŽุงู„ู ูƒูŽุงู„ุฌูู†ู’ุฏููŠู‘ู ู…ูุณู’ุชูŽูƒู’ุจูุฑุงู‹
ูˆูŽู…ูŽุง ุฃูŽุญูŽุจู‘ูŽ ุงู„ุทู‘ููู„ูŽ ู…ูุณู’ุชูŽูƒู’ุจูุฑูŽุง

4. His nanny said, when one day
He walked polite, deserve you pay

ูค. ู‚ุงู„ูŽุชู’ ู„ูŽู‡ู ุงู„ู…ูุฑู’ุถูุนู ูŠูŽูˆู’ู…ุงู‹ ูˆูŽู‚ุฏู’
ุฃูŽุญู’ุณูŽู†ูŽ ุณูŽูŠู’ุฑุงู‹ ุญูŽู‚ู‘ูŽ ุฃูŽู†ู’ ุชูุคู’ุฌูŽุฑูŽุง

5. Come, weโ€™ll visit grandma, wear
Your fine coat, her joy to share

ูฅ. ู‡ูŽูŠู‘ูŽุง ู†ูŽุฒูุฑู’ ุฌูŽุฏู‘ูŽุชูŽูƒูŽ ุงู„ุขู†ูŽ ูŠูŽุง
ุจูู†ูŽูŠู‘ูŽ ูุงู„ู’ุจูŽุณู’ ุซูŽูˆู’ุจูŽูƒ ุงู„ุฃูŽูุฎุฑูŽุง

6. Off he ran like a gazelle, thrilled
To his room, excitement filled

ูฆ. ูุฑูŽุงุญูŽ ู…ูุซู’ู„ูŽ ุงู„ุธู‘ูŽุจู’ูŠู ูŠูŽุนู’ุฏููˆ ุฅูู„ู‰
ุบุฑู’ูุชูู‡ู ุฌูŽุฐู’ู„ุงู† ู…ูุณู’ุชุจู’ุดูุฑุง

7. There perched a bird in a barren cage
Silent, lonesome, a prisoner for age

ูง. ูˆูŽูƒุงู†ูŽ ูููŠ ุฅูุญู’ุฏูŽู‰ ุงู„ูƒููˆูŽู‰ ุทูŽุงุฆูุฑูŒ
ู‚ูŽุฏู’ ุฃูŽูˆู’ุฏูŽุนููˆู‡ู ู‚ูŽููŽุตุงู‹ ู…ูู‚ู’ููุฑุง

8. The boy unlocked the cage, let fly
The bird. โ€œWell done!โ€ was his cry

ูจ. ุฑูŽุขู‡ู ูููŠู‡ู ุตูŽุงู…ูุชุงู‹ ู…ููˆุญูŽุดุงู‹
ูƒูŽู…ูŽุง ูŠูŽูƒูˆู†ู ุงู„ุญูุฑู‘ู ู…ูุณู’ุชูŽุฃู’ุณุฑูŽุง

9. โ€œYou seem eager to visit grandma dear
Then go, come back early, have no fearโ€

ูฉ. ููŽููŽุชูŽุญูŽ ุงู„ู’ุจูŽุงุจูŽ ู„ูŽู‡ู ู…ูุณู’ุฑูุนุงู‹
ูˆูŽู‚ูŽุงู„ูŽ ุฃูŽุญู’ุณูŽู†ู’ุชูŽ ูุฎูŠู’ุฑุงู‹ ุชูŽุฑู‰

ูกู . ุฃูŽุฑุงูƒูŽ ู…ูุดุชูŽุงู‚ุงู‹ ุฅูู„ู‰ ุฌูŽุฏู‘ูŽุฉ
ุชุฒูˆุฑูู‡ูŽุง ููŽุงุฐู’ู‡ูŽุจ ูˆูŽุนูุฏู’ ู…ูุจู’ูƒูุฑูŽุง