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She glanced at me, so I was wounded by her gaze

رمتني فأدمت بألحاظها

1. She glanced at me, so I was wounded by her gaze
Yet I was not the first offender in this case

١. رَمَتْنِي فَأَدْمَتْ بِأَلْحَاظِهَا
وَمَا كُنْتُ بِالبَادِيءِ الآثِمِ

2. And here is my heart, still clinging to her eyes
A victim, hanging on to one who tyrannizes

٢. وَهَذَا فُؤَادِي عَلَى جَفْنِهَا
غَرِيمٌ تَعَلَّقَ بِالغَارِمِ