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I read your poetry collection, not turning

ู‚ุฑุฃุช ุฏูŠูˆุงู†ูƒ ู„ุง ุฃู†ุซู†ูŠ

1. I read your poetry collection, not turning
Away from a verse except to another verse

ูก. ู‚ูŽุฑูŽุฃู’ุชู ุฏููŠูˆูŽุงู†ูŽูƒูŽ ู„ุงูŽ ุฃูŽู†ู’ุซูŽู†ููŠย ย ย 
ุนูŽู†ู’ ู…ููˆู†ูู‚ู ุฅูู„ุงู‘ูŽ ุฅูู„ู‰ ู…ููˆูู†ู‚ู

2. As if I were in a garden bursting
With fresh blossoms and flowers bright

ูข. ูƒูŽุฃูŽู†ู‘ูŽู†ููŠ ูููŠ ุฑูŽูˆู’ุถูŽุฉู ุชูŽุฒู’ุฏูŽู‡ููŠ
ุจูุงู„ู…ูุฒู’ู‡ูุฑู ุงู„ุบุถู‘ู ูˆูŽุจูุงู„ู…ููˆู’ุฑูู‚ู

3. Are you averse to poetry, O you
Whose poetry this isโ€”how can you avoid it?

ูฃ. ุฃูŽู…ูุนู’ุฑูุถูŒ ุฃูŽู†ู’ุชูŽ ุนูŽู†ู’ ุงู„ุดู‘ูุนู’ุฑู ูŠูŽุง
ู…ูŽู†ู’ ุดูุนู’ุฑูู‡ ู‡ูŽุฐูŽุง ููŽู…ูŽุง ุชูŽุชู‘ูŽู‚ููŠ

4. Is there after attainment of an aim
A higher ascent the climber can attain?

ูค. ู‡ูŽู„ู’ ูููŠ ุชูŽูˆูŽุฎู‘ููŠ ุบูŽุงูŠูŽุฉู ุจูŽุนู’ุฏูŽู‡ู
ู…ูู†ู’ ู…ูุฑู’ุชูŽู‚ู‰ู‹ ูŠูŽุจู’ู„ูุบูู‡ู ุงู„ู…ูุฑู’ุชูŽู‚ููŠ

5. Perhaps out of you I revealed something
Rashly in the guise of the anxious

ูฅ. ู„ูŽุนูŽู„ู‘ูŽ ุชููŠู‡ุงู‹ ู…ูู†ูƒูŽ ุฃูŽุจู’ุฏูŽูŠู’ุชูู‡ู
ู…ูุฌู’ุชูŽุฑูุฆุงู‹ ูููŠ ุตููˆุฑุฉู ุงู„ู…ูุดู’ููู‚ู

6. As for what you fashioned fluently
In polished, lucid style and elegance

ูฆ. ุฃูŽู…ู‘ูŽุง ุงู„ู‘ูŽุฐููŠ ุฏูŽุจู‘ูŽุฌู’ุชูŽู‡ู ู…ูุฑู’ุณูŽู„ุงู‹
ู…ูู†ูŽ ุงู„ุทู‘ูุฑูŽุงุฒู ุงู„ูˆูŽุงุถูุญู ุงู„ุฑู‘ูŽูˆู’ู†ูŽู‚ู

7. In your artistic proseโ€”that which
Is unmatched today or in times past

ูง. ูููŠ ู†ูŽุซู’ุฑููƒูŽ ุงู„ููŽู†ู‘ููŠู‘ู ูˆู‡ู’ูˆูŽ ุงู„ู‘ูŽุฐููŠ
ู„ุงูŽ ูŠูู„ู’ุญูŽู‚ู ุงู„ูŠูŽูˆู’ู…ูŽ ูˆูŽู„ูŽู…ู’ ูŠูุณู’ุจูŽู‚ู

8. With every ingenious, splendid meaning
And every eloquent, shining word

ูจ. ุจููƒูู„ู‘ู ู…ูŽุนู’ู†ู‰ู‹ ุจูŽุงุฑูุนู ุจูŽุงู‡ูุฑู
ูˆูŽูƒู„ู‘ู ู„ูŽูู’ุธู ู†ูŽุงุตูุนู ู…ูุดู’ุฑูู‚ู

9. It flowed freely, for kindness constrains it
Marvel at it from one freed, not constrained

ูฉ. ุฃูŽุทู’ู„ูู‚ูŽ ูˆูŽุงู„ุฅูุญู’ุณูŽุงู†ู ู‚ูŽูŠู’ุฏูŒ ู„ูŽู‡ูย ย ย 
ุฃูŽุนู’ุฌูุจู’ ุจูู‡ู ู…ูู†ู’ ู‚ูŽูŠู‘ูุฏู ู…ูุทู’ู„ูŽู‚ู

10. The mysteries of knowledge unfold in a time
Whose path was cleared and left no track

ูกู . ุชูŽุฌู’ู„ููˆ ุฎูŽุจูŽุงูŠูŽุง ุงู„ู’ุนูู„ู’ู…ู ูููŠ ุญูู‚ู’ุจูŽุฉู
ุณูŽุจููŠู„ูู‡ูŽุง ุดูŽู‚ู‘ูŽุชู’ ููŽู„ูŽู…ู’ ุชูุทู’ุฑูŽู‚ู

11. Exploring, deducing, seizing
The certain and most assured in doubt

ูกูก. ู…ูุณู’ุชูŽูƒู’ุดููุงู‹ ู…ูุณู’ุชูŽู†ู’ุจูุทุงู‹ ุขุฎูุฐุงู‹ย ย ย 
ูููŠ ุงู„ุฑู‘ูŽูŠู’ุจู ุจูุงู„ุฃูŽุซู’ุจูŽุชู ูˆูŽุงู„ุฃูŽูˆู’ุซูŽู‚ู

12. You accept no view on mere whim
That removes it from the sphere of logic

ูกูข. ู„ุงูŽ ุชูŽู‚ู’ุจูŽู„ู ุงู„ุฑู‘ูŽุฃู’ูŠูŽ ุนูŽู„ูŽู‰ ุนูู„ู‘ูŽุฉูย ย ย 
ุชูุจู’ุฑูุฒูู‡ู ุนูŽู†ู’ ุญูŽูŠู‘ูุฒู ุงู„ู…ูŽู†ู’ุทูู‚ู

13. Without your testing or blemish
To verify the claim though itโ€™s not verified

ูกูฃ. ุจูู„ุงูŽ ุงูู’ุชูุฆูŽุงุชู ู…ูู†ู’ูƒูŽ ุฃูŽูˆู’ ู„ููˆุซูŽุฉูย ย ย 
ุชูุตูŽุฏู‘ูู‚ู ุงู„ุฒู‘ูŽุนู’ู…ูŽ ูˆูŽู„ูŽู…ู’ ูŠูŽุตู’ุฏูู‚ู

14. That, O you who brush off pearls, is what
Perplexed the seekerโ€™s hopes for choice

ูกูค. ููŽุฐูŽุงูƒูŽ ูŠูŽุง ู…ูŽู†ู’ ูŠูŽุนู’ุฑูุถู ุงู„ุฏูุฑู‘ูŽ ู…ูŽุง
ุญูŽูŠู‘ูŽุฑู’ุชูŽ ูููŠู‡ู ู…ูŽุทู’ู…ูŽุนูŽ ุงู„ู…ูู†ู’ุชูŽู‚ููŠ

15. A book brought memoryโ€™s steps back
To the prime of lucid language

ูกูฅ. ุณููู’ุฑูŒ ุฃูŽุนูŽุงุฏูŽ ุงู„ุฐู‘ููƒู’ุฑูŽ ุฃูŽุฏู’ุฑูŽุงุฌูŽู‡ูย ย ย 
ุฅูู„ู‰ ุดูŽุจูŽุงุจู ุงู„ู„ู‘ูุบูŽุฉู ุงู„ุฑู‘ูŽูŠู‘ูู‚ู

16. It opened new horizons for the letter dhad*
Leaving none of its history veiled

ูกูฆ. ุฃูŽุญู’ุฏูŽุซูŽ ู„ูู„ู’ุถู‘ูŽุงุฏู ูˆูŽุชูŽุงุฑููŠุฎูู‡ูŽุง
ููŽุชู’ุญุงู‹ ูˆูŽู„ูŽู…ู’ ูŠูุจู’ู‚ู ุนูŽู„ูŽู‰ ู…ูุบู’ู„ู‚ู