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I languished while yearning burned my liver,

ظللت والشوق محرق كبدي

1. I languished while yearning burned my liver,
Until destiny brought joy in love and freedom.

١. ظَلَلْتُ وَالشَّوْقُ مُحْرِقٌ كَبِدِي
حَتَّى قَضَى السَّعْدُ فِي الهَوَى وَطَرِي

2. Then came a day with no sun but my own,
No light but my moon's soft beams.

٢. فَكَانَ يَوْمٌ لا شَمْسَ فِيهِ سِوَى
شَمْسِ وَلا نَيِّرٌ سِوَى قَمَرِي

3. A promise kept, in purest faith -
No threat could match that day in my life's span.

٣. أَنْجَزَ وَعْداً فِيهِ الصَّفَاءُ فَلَمْ
يَشِبْهُ غَيْرُ الوَعِيدِ مِنْ عُمَرِ

4. My beauty close, his passion conquered me;
My fortress breached - no fear, no caution left.

٤. حُسْنِي إِلَى جَانِبِي وَسَطْوَتُهُ
حُصْنِي فَمَا خَشْيَتِي وَمَا حَذَرِي