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Alas, would that I knew if my she-camel might fail me

ุฃู„ุง ู„ูŠุช ุดุนุฑูŠ ู‡ู„ ุชุฎุจ ู…ุทูŠุชูŠ

1. Alas, would that I knew if my she-camel might fail me
In a land of elevated sand-dunes and open plain;

ูก. ุฃูŽู„ุง ู„ูŽูŠุชูŽ ุดูุนุฑูŠ ู‡ูŽู„ ุชูŽุฎูุจู‘ู ู…ูŽุทููŠู‘ูŽุชูŠ
ุจูุญูŽูŠุซู ุงู„ูƒูŽุซูŠุจู ุงู„ููŽุฑุฏู ูˆูŽุงู„ุฃูŽุฌุฑูŽุนู ุงู„ุณู‘ูŽู‡ู„ู

2. More delicious to me her grazing the ground, and pleasing to me
Are the edges of a fertile meadow watered by the rain-pools.

ูข. ุฃูŽู„ูŽุฐู‘ ุจูู‡ู ู…ูŽุณู‘ูŽ ุงู„ุซู‘ูŽุฑู‰ ูˆูŽูŠุฑูˆู‚ูู†ูŠ
ุญูˆุงุดูŠ ุฑูุจุงู‹ ูŠูŽุบุฐูˆ ุฃูŽุฒุงู‡ูŠุฑูŽู‡ุง ุงู„ูˆูŽุจู„ู

3. But for yearnings of love for Ramla I'd not have said,
If I visited her pasture when it drank in the rain:

ูฃ. ูˆูŽู„ูŽูˆู„ุง ุฏูˆุงุนูŠ ุญูุจู‘ู ุฑูŽู…ู„ูŽุฉูŽ ู„ูŽู… ุฃูŽู‚ูู„ู’
ุฅูุฐุง ุฒูุฑุชู ู…ูŽุบู†ุงู‡ุง ุจูู‡ู ุณูู‚ูŠูŽ ุงู„ุฑู‘ูŽู…ู„ู

4. "Blessed the place of al-สฟUqayq, blessed who dwells there,
And though she departs may none bless al-สพAthl!"

ูค. ููŽูŠุง ุญูŽุจู‘ูŽุฐุง ุฃูŽุซู„ู ุงู„ุนูŽู‚ูŠู‚ู ูˆูŽู…ูŽู† ุจูู‡ู
ูˆูŽุฅูู† ุฑูŽุญูŽู„ูŽุชู’ ุนูŽู†ู‡ู ููŽู„ุง ุญูŽุจู‘ูŽุฐุง ุงู„ุฃูŽุซู„ู

5. The weakness of the effect of her speech lies in the wantonness of youth.
She has a glance that makes you forget what the buds are doing.

ูฅ. ุถูŽุนูŠููŽุฉู ุฑูŽุฌุนู ุงู„ู‚ูŽูˆู„ู ู…ูู† ุชูŽุฑูŽูู ุงู„ุตู‘ูุจุง
ู„ูŽู‡ุง ู†ูŽุธุฑูŽุฉูŒ ุชูู†ุณูŠูƒูŽ ู…ุง ูŠูŽูุนูŽู„ู ุงู„ู†ู‘ูŽุตู„ู

6. And she has secretly sent me her messenger
That I may abandon her - but to abandon is the mark of him who is voided of good sense!

ูฆ. ูˆูŽู‚ูŽุฏ ุจูŽุนูŽุซูŽุชู’ ุณูุฑู‘ุงู‹ ุฅูู„ูŠู‘ูŽ ุฑูŽุณูˆู„ูŽู‡ุง
ู„ูุฃูŽู‡ุฌูุฑูŽู‡ุง ูˆูŽุงู„ู‡ูŽุฌุฑู ุดูŠู…ูŽุฉู ู…ูŽู† ูŠูŽุณู„ูˆ

7. They fear for me from her people now they have vowed my blood shed -
I shall ransom it amongst them though the ransom be exorbitant.

ูง. ุชูŽุฎุงูู ุนูŽู„ูŽูŠู‘ูŽ ุงู„ุญูŽูŠู‘ูŽ ุฅูุฐ ู†ูŽุฐูŽุฑูˆุง ุฏูŽู…ูŠ
ุณูŽุฃูุฑุฎูุตูู‡ู ููŠู‡ุง ุนูŽู„ู‰ ุฃูŽู†ู‘ูŽู‡ู ูŠูŽุบู„ูˆ

8. Can fear of evil events keep me from paying her a visit
And solace myself for her estrangement, though death be the price!

ูจ. ุฃูŽูŠูŽู…ู†ูŽุนูู†ูŠ ุฎูŽูˆูู ุงู„ุฑู‘ูŽุฏู‰ ุฃูŽู† ุฃูŽุฒูˆุฑูŽู‡ุง
ูˆูŽุฃูŽุฑูˆูŽุญู ู…ูู† ุตูŽุจุฑูŠ ุนูŽู„ู‰ ู‡ูŽุฌุฑูู‡ุง ุงู„ู‚ูŽุชู„ู

9. When she is appeased with me, there is no night
I lie down in anger - save my household and my family!

ูฉ. ุฅูุฐุง ุฑูŽุถูŠุชู’ ุนูŽู†ู‘ูŠ ููŽู„ุง ุจุงุชูŽ ู„ูŽูŠู„ูŽุฉู‹
ุนูŽู„ู‰ ุบูŽุถูŽุจู ุฅูู„ู‘ุง ุงู„ุนูŽุดูŠุฑูŽุฉู ูˆูŽุงู„ุฃูŽู‡ู„ู