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One morning as dawn was breaking, Layla glanced at me

ุฑู…ุชู†ูŠ ุบุฏุงุฉ ุงู„ุฎูŠู ู„ูŠู„ู‰ ุจู†ุธุฑุฉ

1. One morning as dawn was breaking, Layla glanced at me
Over the edge of her veil, while the Pleiades faded;

ูก. ุฑูŽู…ูŽุชู†ูŠ ุบูŽุฏุงุฉูŽ ุงู„ุฎูŽูŠูู ู„ูŽูŠู„ู‰ ุจูู†ูŽุธุฑูŽุฉู
ุนูŽู„ู‰ ุฎูŽููŽุฑู ูˆูŽุงู„ุนูŠุณู ุตูุนู’ุฑูŒ ุฎูุฏูˆุฏูู‡ุง

2. None escape when she turns her gaze on them, save with plenteous tears
That mirror, with their flowing, the necklaces round her throat.

ูข. ููŽู…ุง ู„ุงุฐูŽ ู…ูŽู† ู†ุงู„ุชู‡ู ุฅูู„ู‘ุง ุจูู…ูŽุฏู…ูŽุนู
ูŠูุญุงูƒูŠ ุจูุฌูŽูู†ูŽูŠู‡ู ุงู„ุฏู‘ูู…ูˆุนูŽ ุนูู‚ูˆุฏูู‡ุง

3. She left in haste, and the look of reproach that she gave me
Was enough โ€“ she moved slowly away, hemmed in by the crowds.

ูฃ. ูˆูŽุฃูŽุฐุฑุช ุจูุฌูŽู…ุนู ูุงู„ู…ูุญูŽุตู‘ูุจู ุนูŽุจุฑูŽุฉู‹
ููŽุธูŽู„ู‘ูŽุชู’ ุจูุฃูŽุทุฑุงูู ุงู„ุจูŽู†ุงู†ู ุชูŽุฐูˆุฏูู‡ุง

4. With her skin so fair she knows nothing of liberalityโ€™s ways;
Her talk is only of trivialities, nothing profound.

ูค. ู…ูู†ูŽ ุงู„ุจูŠุถู ู„ูŽู… ุชูŽุนุฑูู ุณููˆู‰ ุงู„ุจูุฎู„ู ุดูŠู…ูŽุฉู‹
ูˆูŽู„ูŽู… ูŠูุฑุฌูŽ ุฅูู„ู‘ุง ุจูุงู„ุฃูŽุญุงุฏูŠุซู ุฌูˆุฏูู‡ุง

5. She complained of sickness, but she is healthy enough;
I see only hearts that sigh over whatever she does.

ูฅ. ุดูŽูƒูŽุช ุณูŽู‚ูŽู…ุงู‹ ุฃูŽู„ุญุงุธูู‡ุง ูˆูŽู‡ูŠ ุตูุญู‘ูŽุฉูŒ
ููŽู„ูŽุณุชู ุฃูŽุฑู‰ ุฅูู„ู‘ุง ุงู„ู‚ูู„ูˆุจูŽ ุชูŽุนูˆุฏูู‡ุง