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Success lies under the lines of my poetry

ุงู„ู†ุฌุญ ุชุญุช ุฎุทุง ุงู„ู…ู‡ุฑูŠุฉ ุงู„ู†ุฌุจ

1. Success lies under the lines of my poetry
And glory above the clouds of my prose

ูก. ุงู„ู†ู‘ูุฌู’ุญู ุชูŽุญู’ุชูŽ ุฎูุทุง ุงู„ู…ูŽู‡ู’ุฑููŠู‘ูŽุฉู ุงู„ู†ู‘ูุฌูุจู
ูˆูŽุงู„ุนูุฒู‘ู ููŽูˆู’ู‚ูŽ ุธูุจุง ุงู„ู‡ูู†ู’ุฏููŠู‘ูŽุฉู ุงู„ู‚ูุถูุจู

2. Determination awakens the voice of wisdom sleeping
Does the millstone not turn but around the pole?

ูข. ูˆูŽุงู„ุนูŽุฒู’ู…ู ูŠููˆู‚ูุธู ุฏุงุนููŠ ุงู„ุญูŽุฒู’ู…ู ู†ุงุฆูู…ู‡ู
ูˆูŽู‡ูŽู„ ุชูŽุฏูˆุฑู ุงู„ุฑู‘ูŽุญูŽู‰ ุฅู„ุง ุนู„ู‰ ุงู„ู‚ูุทูุจู

3. So what is the point of a land where one stays
If yearning for the homeland makes the seeker turn back

ูฃ. ููŽู…ุง ุงู„ุซู‘ูŽูˆุงุกู ุจูุฃูŽุฑู’ุถู ู„ูู„ู’ู…ูู‚ูŠู… ุจูู‡ุง
ุฅูู„ู‰ ุงู„ู‡ููˆูŽูŠู’ู†ู‰ ุญูŽู†ูŠู†ู ุงู„ูˆูู„ู‘ูŽู‡ู ุงู„ุณู‘ูู„ูุจู

4. Time has quenched my thirst and refined it
What does the night want from a stranger like me?

ูค. ุฃูŽู‚ู’ุฐูŽู‰ ุงู„ุฒู‘ูŽู…ุงู†ู ุจูู‡ุง ุดูุฑู’ุจูŠ ูˆูŽุฑูŽู†ู‘ูŽู‚ูŽู‡ู
ู…ุงุฐุง ุชูุฑูŠุฏู ุงู„ู„ู‘ูŽูŠุงู„ูŠ ู…ูู†ู’ ููŽุชู‰ู‹ ุบูุฑูุจู

5. When will I quench the thirst of wine from a mouth
That reaches into my heart like spears?

ูฅ. ู…ูŽุชู‰ ุฃูุฑูŽูˆู‘ููŠ ุบูŽู„ูŠู„ูŽ ุงู„ุณู‘ูู…ู’ุฑู ู…ูู†ู’ ุซูุบูŽุฑู
ูŠูŽู…ูุฏู’ู†ูŽ ููŠู‡ู†ู‘ูŽ ูƒูŽุงู„ุฃุดู’ุทุงู†ู ูููŠ ุงู„ู‚ูู„ูุจู

6. For they have folded my camels, and the water is blood
And the valleys have been adorned with grass

ูฆ. ููŽู‡ูู†ู‘ูŽ ุฃูŽุฒู’ูˆูŽูŠู’ู†ูŽ ุฅูุจู’ู„ูŠ ูˆูŽุงู„ู…ููŠุงู‡ู ุฏูŽู…ูŒ
ูˆูŽู‚ูŽุฏู’ ุชูŽูˆูŽุดู‘ูŽุญูŽุชู ุงู„ุบูุฏู’ุฑุงู†ู ุจูุงู„ุนูุดูุจู

7. I take pride in myself, though I wake in Mudar
I lean on honor and strength from my firm house

ูง. ุฃูุฒู’ู‡ูŽู‰ ุจูู†ูŽูู’ุณูŠ ูˆูŽุฅูู†ู’ ุฃูŽุตู’ุจูŽุญู’ุชู ููŠ ู…ูุถูŽุฑู
ุฃูŽู„ู’ูˆูŠ ุนู„ู‰ ุงู„ุนูุฒู‘ู ู…ูู†ู’ ุจูŽูŠู’ุชูŠ ู‚ููˆู‰ ุงู„ุทู†ูุจู

8. For wood is nothing without its fragrance
And palm trees are valued for their fruit, not their husks

ูจ. ููŽุงู„ุนููˆุฏู ู…ูู†ู’ ุญูŽุทูŽุจู ู„ูˆู„ุง ุฑูŽูˆุงุฆูุญูู‡ู
ูˆูŽุงู„ู†ู‘ูŽุฎู’ู„ู ุชููƒู’ุฑูŽู…ู ู„ูู„ุฃูŽุซู’ู…ุงุฑ ู„ุง ุงู„ุนูุณูุจู

9. And I have made the object of my gaze worthless
Swaying their branches as they walk on the dunes

ูฉ. ูˆูŽู‚ูŽุฏู’ ุฌูŽุนูŽู„ู’ุชู ู…ูŽุฑุงุฏูŽ ุงู„ุทู‘ูŽุฑูŽูู ุบูŽูŠู’ุฑ ู…ูŽู‡ุงู‹
ูŠูŽู‡ู’ุฒูุฒู’ู†ูŽ ููŠ ุงู„ู…ูŽุดู’ูŠ ุฃูŽุบู’ุตุงู†ูŽุงู‹ ุนู„ู‰ ูƒูุซูุจู

10. Eyes are aloof from the arrogant
And my gaze is a comet flaming through the sky

ูกู . ุฅูู†ู‘ูŽ ุงู„ุนููŠูˆู†ูŽ ุนูŽู†ู ุงู„ุนูŽู„ู’ูŠุงุกู ู†ุงุจููŠูŽุฉูŒ
ูˆูŽู…ูŽุณู’ุฑูŽุญู ุงู„ุนูŽูŠู’ู†ู ู…ูู†ู‘ูŠ ู…ูŽุณู’ุจูŽุญู ุงู„ุดู‘ูู‡ูุจู

11. She who still looks through time
At glory, questions, and books

ูกูก. ู‡ููŠูŽ ุงู„ู‘ุชูŠ ู„ุง ุชูŽุฒุงู„ู ุงู„ุฏู‘ูŽู‡ู’ุฑูŽ ู†ุงุธูุฑูŽุฉู‹
ุฅูู„ู‰ ุนูู„ุงู‹ ูˆูŽู„ูุณูุคู‘ูŽุงู„ู ูˆููŠ ูƒูุชูุจู

12. She complained, so God healed her and restored
A glance sharper than famed blades

ูกูข. ูˆูŽู‚ูŽุฏู’ ุดูŽูƒูŽุชู’ ููŽุดูŽูุงู‡ูŽุง ุงู„ู„ู‡ู ูˆูŽุงุฑู’ุชูŽุฌูŽุนุชู’
ู„ูŽุญู’ุธุงู‹ ุฃูŽุญูŽุฏู‘ูŽ ู…ูู†ูŽ ุงู„ู…ูŽุฃู’ุซููˆุฑูŽุฉู ุงู„ุฑู‘ูุณูุจู

13. The sun gazes with an eye that will not shade
From its light what clouds try to conceal

ูกูฃ. ูˆูŽุงู„ุดู‘ูŽู…ู’ุณู ุชูŽุฑู’ู†ูˆ ุจูุนูŽูŠู’ู†ู ู„ุง ูŠูุบูŽูŠู‘ูุถู ู…ูู†ู’
ุฃูŽู†ู’ูˆุงุฑูู‡ุง ู…ุง ูŠููˆุงุฑููŠู‡ุง ู…ูู†ูŽ ุงู„ุณู‘ูุญูุจู

14. And Al-Mashrafiyaโ€™s windows do not hide
Their brightness even if shuttered and enclosed

ูกูค. ูˆูŽุงู„ู…ูŽุดู’ุฑูŽูููŠู‘ุฉู ู„ุง ุชูŽู†ู’ุจูˆ ู…ูŽุถุงุฑูุจูู‡ุง
ููŠู‡ุง ุงู„ู…ูŽุถุงุกู ูˆูŽุฅูู† ุฑูุฏู‘ูŽุชู’ ุฅูู„ู‰ ุงู„ู‚ูุฑูุจู

15. So glory awoke happy with wellness
Playing with its shadows in their veiled clothes

ูกูฅ. ููŽุฃูŽุตู’ุจุญูŽ ุงู„ู…ูŽุฌู’ุฏู ู…ูŽุณู’ุฑูˆุฑุงู‹ ุจูุนุงูููŠุฉู
ุฃูู„ุงุนูุจู ุงู„ุธู‘ูู„ู‘ูŽ ููŠ ุฃูŽุซู’ูˆุงุจูู‡ุง ุงู„ู‚ูุดูุจู

16. And time shone until I saw its page
Brought out from the cheeks of pretty maidens

ูกูฆ. ูˆูŽุฃูŽุดู’ุฑูŽู‚ูŽ ุงู„ุฏู‘ูŽู‡ู’ุฑู ุญูŽุชู‘ู‰ ุฎูู„ู’ุชู ุตูŽูู’ุญูŽุชูŽู‡ู
ุชูู‚ูŽุฏู‘ู ู…ูู†ู’ ูˆูŽุฌูŽู†ุงุชู ุงู„ุฎูุฑู‘ูŽุฏู ุงู„ุนูุฑูุจู