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I praise some people I think

ุฅู†ูŠ ู„ุฃู…ุฏุญ ุฃู‚ูˆุงู…ุง ุฃุธู†ู‡ู…

1. I praise some people I think
Will do me justice, nay, yet more

ูก. ุฅูู†ู‘ูŠ ู„ูุฃูŽู…ุฏูŽุญู ุฃูŽู‚ูˆุงู…ุงู‹ ุฃูŽุธูู†ู‘ูู‡ูู…ู
ูŠูŽู‚ุถูˆู†ูŽ ุญูŽู‚ู‘ูŽ ุซูŽู†ุงุฆูŠ ููŽูˆู‚ูŽ ู…ุง ูŠูŽุฌูุจู

2. If they accept, I live; if not, I die
Though round their necks my songs are tied

ูข. ููŽุฅูู† ู‡ูู…ู ูˆูŽู‡ูŽุจูˆุง ู…ูŽู†ู‘ูˆุง ุนูŽู„ูŽูŠู‘ูŽ ุจูู‡ู
ููŽุงู„ู…ูŽูˆุชู ุฅูู† ู†ูŽุฌูŽู„ูˆุง ูˆูŽุงู„ู…ูŽูˆุชู ุฅูู† ูˆูŽู‡ูŽุจูˆุง

3. Like golden chains of Ophir wrought:
The jewelโ€™s virtue is unsought

ูฃ. ู‡ูŽุฐุง ูˆูŽู‚ูŽุฏ ุฃูŽู„ุจูŽุณูŽุช ุฃูŽุฌุณุงุฏูู‡ูู… ูููƒุฑูŠ
ู…ูู…ู‘ุง ุชูŽุตูˆุบู ุนูู‚ูˆุฏุงู‹ ูƒูู„ู‘ูŽู‡ุง ุฐูŽู‡ูŽุจู

4. If hearts lack wisdom. Of what worth
Are jewels in a granite girth?

ูค. ุฐุง ุงู„ุฏูุฑู‘ู ู…ูŽู† ูƒุงู†ูŽ ุฏูุฑู‘ุงู‹ ููŽู‡ูˆูŽ ูŠูŽู„ุจูŽุณูู‡ู
ููŽูƒูŽูŠููŽ ูŠูŽู†ููู‚ู ูˆูŽุงู„ุฃูŽู‚ูˆุงู…ู ู…ูุฎุดูŽู„ูŽุจู