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O you whose frown is illness,

أيا من نون حاجبه سقام

1. O you whose frown is illness,
And whose past is soothing as a dove,

١. أَيا مَن نونُ حاجِبِهِ سَقامُ
وَيا مَن لامُ سالِفِهِ حِمامُ

2. I have written seeking your approval with my compositions,
Yet no respect for you has stuck with me,

٢. كَتَبتُ إِلى رِضاكَ بِقَطعِ رَسمي
وَلَم يَثبُت عَلَيَّ لَكَ اِحتِرامُ

3. And I have clearly explained how I've been wronged,
Without mistakes, so your view is what matters, farewell.

٣. وَقَد فَصَّلتُ جُملَةَ ما دَهاني
بِلا غَلَطٍ فَرَأيُكَ وَالسَلامُ