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Stop at what you both know of my meadows

ู‚ูุง ุนู†ุฏ ู…ู…ุง ุชุนุฑูุงู† ุฑุจูˆุนูŠ

1. Stop at what you both know of my meadows
Even if my tears outpoured from excess sorrow

ูก. ู‚ูุง ุนู†ุฏ ู…ู…ุง ุชุนุฑูุงู† ุฑุจูˆุนูŠ
ูˆุงู† ุณุจู‚ุช ูุฑุท ุงู„ุนุฒุงุก ุฏู…ูˆุนูŠ

2. We revive throughout time a habit of closeness
As if those long gone were never absent

ูข. ู†ุญูŠูŠ ุนู„ู‰ ุทูˆู„ ุงู„ุจู„ู‰ ุฑุณู… ุฏู…ู†ุฉ
ูƒุฃู† ู„ู… ุชูƒู† ู…ู† ุขู„ููŠู† ุฌู…ูŠุน

3. Why revive impressions as if they were
Grinding at the base of steps once climbed

ูฃ. ูˆู…ุงุฐุง ู†ุญูŠูŠ ู…ู† ุฑุณูˆู… ูƒุฃู†ู‡ุง
ุจุฃุณูู„ ุณู„ู…ุงู†ูŠู† ุณุญู‚ ุตุฏูŠุน

4. Like three doves fallen in its courtyard
Ceaselessly colliding as they descend

ูค. ูƒุฃู† ุญู…ุงู…ุงุช ุซู„ุงุซุง ุจุฑุจุนู‡ุง
ูˆู‚ุนู† ูู…ุง ูŠุณุฃู…ู† ุทูˆู„ ูˆู‚ูˆุน

5. Though I pour what I know, I know Iโ€™m still
Partly desiring what wonโ€™t obey

ูฅ. ูˆุฅู†ูŠ ู„ุตุจ ู…ุง ุนู„ู…ุช ูˆุฃู†ู†ูŠ
ู„ุจุนุถ ู‡ูˆู‰ ู†ูุณูŠ ู„ุบูŠุฑ ู…ุทูŠุน