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My companion from Jadhalan shows sadness

عذيري من جذلان يبدي كآبة

1. My companion from Jadhalan shows sadness
And his ribs are yellow from what he is attempting

١. عَذِيريَ مِن جَذلانَ يُبدي كَآبَةً
وَأَضلُعُهُ مِمّا يُحاوِلُهُ صِفرُ

2. A gentle palm tree leaning when the breeze leads it
To the sweetness of pampering, magic supports it

٢. أُمَيلدُ مَيّاسٌ إِذا قادَهُ الصَبا
إِلى مُلَحِ الإِدلالِ أَيَّدَهُ السِحرُ

3. It wets the cups of its flowers with its nectar
And narrates weeping intentionally as the flowers smiled

٣. يَبُلُّ مَآقي زَهرَتَيهِ بِريقِهِ
وَيَحكي البُكا عَمداً كَما اِبتَسَمَ الزَهرُ

4. Does it pretend that tears wet its eyelids?
Has wine ever been extracted from the narcissus flower?

٤. أَيوهِمُ أَنَّ الدَمعَ بَلَّ جُفونَهُ
وَهَل عُصِرَت يَوماً مِنَ النَرجِسِ الخَمرُ