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I wrote it out of excessive longing

كتبتها من آمد

1. I wrote it out of excessive longing
For I miss you more than words can say

١. كَتَبتُها مِن آمِدِ
عَن فَرطِ شَوقٍ زائِدِ

2. Since we parted, my life has lost its joy
My days are not what they used to be

٢. وَاللَهِ مُذ فارَقتُكُم لَم
تَصفُ لي مَوارِدي

3. Will we ever be close again?
My heart yearns to be by your side

٣. فَهَل زَماني بَعدَها
بِقُربِكُم مُساعِدي

4. So many promises made, should we meet
In devotion, I'd spend my life in prayer

٤. فَكَم نَذورٍ أَصبَحَت
عَلَيَّ لِلمَساجِدِ

5. Just to be with you for a single day
I'd give all the years that remain of my life

٥. وَهَبتُ باقي عُمُري
لَكُم بِيَومٍ واحِدِ