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Is this beloved of mine an angel or a king?

ملك هذا حبيبي أم ملك

1. Is this beloved of mine an angel or a king?
Whoever is enraptured by these two is doomed

١. مَلَكٌ هذا حبيبي أمْ ملكْ
أيُّ مَنْ هامَ بهذينِ هلكْ

2. If you ask him for affection humbly
He will say: Why do you ask for what isn't yours?

٢. إنْ سألتَ الوصلَ منه صاغراً
قالَ لِمْ تسألُني ما ليسَ لكْ

3. His hair falls onto his shoulders
I said: Oh Layla, how lengthy you are!

٣. أسبَلَ الشعرَ على أكتافِهِ
قلتُ يا ليلي بهِ ما أطولَكْ

4. And he complained of the slenderness of his waist.
I said: how heavy you made it and how tired it became!

٤. وتشكَّى خصرُهُ مِنْ ردفِهِ
قلتُ قَدْ أتعبنَهُ ما أثقلَكْ