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My friend, here is my attempt to translate the poem you shared:

للمقدسي بقلبي

1. My friend, here is my attempt to translate the poem you shared:
For al-Maqdisi, in my heart

١. للمقدسيِّ بقلبي
حبٌّ جليُّ الدليلِ

2. Is a love with clear proof.
So whoever has a friend -

٢. فمنْ يكنْ ذا خليلٍ
فالمقدسيُّ خليلي