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I saw two beauties, were I to describe them justly

رأيت مليحين لو أنصفا

1. I saw two beauties, were I to describe them justly
When together, they'd be protected by prayer

١. رأيتُ مليحينِ لوْ أُنْصفا
إذا اجتمعا عُوِّذا بالرُّقى

2. Two moons of dark night and two gazelles of splendor
Two suns of daylight and two tender branches

٢. هلالَيْ دُجى وغزالي فلا
وشَمْسَيْ ضَحاءٍ وغُصْنَيْ نَقا