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A questioner asked, has his glance grown listless?

وقائل هل طرفه فاتر

1. A questioner asked, has his glance grown listless?
I said, by the N and K,

١. وقائلٍ هلْ طرفُهُ فاترٌ
فقلتُ بالنونِ وبالكافِ

2. His hips are from Mount Rayyan,
His sculpted cheek from Mount Qaf.

٢. مِنْ جبلِ الريانِ أردافُهُ
وصدغُهُ المعطوفُ مِنْ قافِ