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My critic said to me, "Does a dark-eyed one blame you?"

قال لي عاذلي أتسبيك عين

1. My critic said to me, "Does a dark-eyed one blame you?"
I said, "No, but a human."

١. قالَ لي عاذلي أتسبيكَ عينٌ
منهُ سوداءُ قلتُ بلْ إنسانُ

2. He said to me, "Then ask him," so I said, "Ask my critic."
He said to me, "You are disgraced." I said, "Disgrace is dishonor."

٢. قال لي فاسألْهُ فقلْتُ اسْلُ عَذْلي
قالَ لي هِنْتَ قلتُ هانَ الهوانُ