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My friend, here is my attempt to translate the Arabic poem you provided:

1. My friend, here is my attempt to translate the Arabic poem you provided:
A need has appeared in this land

١. وحاجة في البلاد لي عرضت
جرّبت فيها العقول والهمما

2. In which I have tested minds and resolves
It is the touchstone of men, revealing to me

٢. فهي محك الرجال يكشف لي
بها طباع اللئام والكرما