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I offer him a branch, his face not yet seen

أفديه غصنا ما بدا وجهه

1. I offer him a branch, his face not yet seen
Except I saw the sun above the rod

١. أفْدِيهِ غُصْنًا مَا بَدَا وَجْهُهُ
إلاَ رَأيْتُ الشَّمْسَ فَوْقَ القَضِيبْ

2. He let down upon his cheeks hair that told
Of blackness, hastening to the top of the dune

٢. أرْخَى عَلَى الأرْدَافِ شَعْراً حَكَى
أسَاوِداً تَسْعَى بِأعْلَى الكَثِيبْ

3. It says to lovers, his glances
Do not deny my deadly aim, my arrow hits its mark

٣. تَقُولُ لِلْعُشَّاقِ ألْحَاظُهُ
لاَ تُنْكِرُوا فَتْكِي فَسَهْمِي مُصِيبْ