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I say to him as night's cheek grows darker,

ุฃู‚ูˆู„ ู„ู‡ ูˆุตุฏุบ ุงู„ู„ูŠู„ ูŠู„ูˆู‰

1. I say to him as night's cheek grows darker,
And morning's nose has sneezed its dawn -

ูก. ุฃู‚ููˆู„ู ู„ูŽู‡ู ูˆูŽุตูุฏู’ุบู ุงู„ู„ู‘ูŽูŠู’ู„ู ูŠูู„ู’ูˆูŽู‰
ูˆูŽุฃู†ู’ูู ุงู„ูุฌุฑู ู‚ุฏ ุนูŽุทูŽุณูŽ ุงู„ุตู‘ูŽุจูŽุงุญูŽุง

2. "Come, let us to the valley go and water
Ourselves." He said, โ€œYes, let's be off!โ€

ูข. ู‡ูŽู„ูู…ู‘ูŽ ุจูู†ูŽุง ุฅู„ูŽู‰ ุงู„ูˆูŽุงุฏููŠ ู„ูู†ูุณู’ู‚ูŽู‰
ุจู‡ ู…ูŽุงุกู‹ ููŽู‚ูŽุงู„ูŽ ู†ูŽุนูŽู…ู’ ูˆูŽุฑูŽุงุญูŽุง