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With a burden atop shouldersโ€”pride

ูˆู…ุญู…ูˆู„ุฉ ููˆู‚ ุงู„ู…ู†ุงูƒุจ ุนุฒุฉ

1. With a burden atop shouldersโ€”pride
Its lineage, in the garden of sorrow, pure

ูก. ูˆูŽู…ูŽุญู…ูˆู„ูŽุฉู ููŽูˆู‚ูŽ ุงู„ู…ูŽู†ุงูƒูุจู ุนูุฒู‘ูŽุฉู‹
ู„ูŽู‡ุง ู†ูŽุณูŽุจูŒ ููŠ ุฑูŽูˆุถูŽุฉู ุงู„ุญูŽุฒู†ู ู…ูุนุฑูู‚ู

2. I saw, in her mirror, wishes unite
As she gathered winds perfumed, dispersed

ูข. ุฑูŽุฃูŽูŠุชู ุจูู…ูŽุฑุขู‡ุง ุงู„ู…ูู†ู‰ ูƒูŽูŠููŽ ุชูŽู„ุชูŽู‚ูŠ
ูˆูŽุดูŽู…ู„ูŽ ุฑููŠุงุญู ุงู„ุทูŠุจู ูˆูŽู‡ูŠูŽ ุชูŽููŽุฑู‘ูŽู‚ู

3. A mouth from the evident sun makes her laugh
An eye of blue water observes her

ูฃ. ูŠูุถุงุญููƒูู‡ุง ุซูŽุบุฑูŒ ู…ูู†ูŽ ุงู„ุดูŽู…ุณู ูˆุงุถูุญูŒ
ูˆูŽูŠูŽู„ุญูŽุธูู‡ุง ุทูŽุฑููŒ ู…ูู†ูŽ ุงู„ู…ุงุกู ุฃูŽุฒุฑูŽู‚ู

4. In her, for water and fire, forms an image
My eyes adore where they drown, burn

ูค. ูˆูŽุชูุฌู„ู‰ ุจูู‡ุง ู„ูู„ู…ุงุกู ูˆูŽุงู„ู†ุงุฑู ุตูˆุฑูŽุฉูŒ
ุชูŽุฑูˆู‚ู ููŽุทูŽุฑููŠ ุญูŽูŠุซู ูŠูŽุบุฑูŽู‚ู ูŠูุญุฑูŽู‚ู