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My aspirations soar like the glimmer of wine

أسجايا كما ترق المدامه

1. My aspirations soar like the glimmer of wine
And my gifts flow like the pouring rain

١. أَسَجايا كَما تَرِقُّ المُدامَه
وَعَطايا كَما تُريقُ الغَمامَه

2. Victory rushes upon him in a surprise attack
The stars shine good tidings of his safety

٢. وَهُجومٌ عَلَيهِ غُرَّةُ نَصرٍ
وَنُجومٌ عَلَيهِ بُشرى سَلامَه

3. The sword is too noble to be sheathed
Victory is too proud to unsheathe its blade

٣. فَهَفا النَصلُ أَن تُناطَ ظُباهُ
وَتَلا النَصرُ أَن يَسُلَّ حُسامَه

4. Oh Abu Bakr, so many deeds to your name
Gratitude yearns to conclude by singing your praises

٤. يا أَبا بَكرٍ كَم يَدٍ لَكَ بِكرٍ
سامَتِ الشُكرَ أَن تَفُضَّ خِتامَه

5. You gifted me though I was undeserving
So I return the favor by singing your praises like a dove

٥. طَوَّقَتني وَكُنتُ غَيرَ مُحَلّى
فَتَغَنَّيتُ بِالمَديحِ حَمامَه

6. Run through time swimmingly and straighten the twisted road
March onward sword in hand with fortunate companions

٦. فَاِركُضِ الدَهرَ سابِحاً وَاِنتَضِ المِق
دارَ سَيفاً وَاِستَصحِبِ السَعدَ لامَه