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How much I said and engraved it on water

كم قلت وخطه على الماء نقش

1. How much I said and engraved it on water
It would not hurt if water was sprinkled on my fire

١. كَم قُلتُ وَخَطَّهُ عَلى الماءِ نَقَش
ما ضَرَّ لَو الماءَ عَلى ناريَ رَشّ

2. Writing on his cheek has overwhelmed me
Look at it, under his side fire is spread

٢. قَد غالَني الخَطُّ عَلى عارِضِه
أَبصِرهُ فَتَحتَ جَنبه النارَ فَرَش