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A kiss distressed me, passing its proper place;

ساءتني قبلة عدت موضعها

1. A kiss distressed me, passing its proper place;
I bent my course to follow its track again.

١. ساءَتنيَ قُبلَةٌ عَدَت مَوضعها
من فيه فَثنَّيتُ لِكَي أُتبِعَها

2. My mouth had been greedy, missing his mouth, I found;
My kiss alighted where it belonged to alight.

٢. لِلسَبِّ شَحا فاه فَهنّأتُ فَمي
أَن قَد وَقَعت قبلتُهُ مَوقعَها