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I whispered, but my beloved disliked whispering

ناجيت فما راق محبي النجوى

1. I whispered, but my beloved disliked whispering
What's the use after complaining became impossible

١. ناجَيتُ فَما راق مُحبّي النَجوى
ما الحيلَةُ بَعدَما اِستَحال الشَكوى

2. No matter how sincere the people became when whispering
Their whispers were perplexed with fear and anxiety

٢. مَهما خلص القَوم نَجيّاً بَهَتَت
مِن خيفة قَصدِها خلالَ النَجوى