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If I were as you described, unresponsive,

هب أني مثل ما حكت أجفوها

1. If I were as you described, unresponsive,
You would not turn away while I pursue.

١. هَب أَنّيَ مِثلَ ما حكت أَجفوها
لم تُعرض عَنّي وَأَنا أَقفوها

2. Grant that her glances pierce my heart with wounds,
Why does she pour salt upon my injury and rub?

٢. هَب أَسهُمُ لَحظِها فُؤادي جَرَحَت
لِم ذَرَّ عَلى جرحيَ مِلحاً فوها