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I saw in the sea of the unseen a speckled army

رأيت ببحر الغيب جيشا عرمرما

1. I saw in the sea of the unseen a speckled army
And following it in form was a pentameter sea

١. رأيْتُ بِبَحْرِ الغَيبِ جَيْشاً عَرَمْرَماً
ويَتْبَعُهُ بالشَّكْلِ بَحرُ خَميسِ

2. Leading it was an individual, so it was said "Do you recognize him?"
I said "Yes, this is my brother and friend"

٢. تَقَدَّمُهُ فَرْدٌ فَقيلَ عَرَفْتَهُ
فَقُلْتُ نَعَمْ هذا أخي وجَليسي