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By my life, if you had seen me the day we parted

ู„ุนู…ุฑูŠ ู„ูˆ ุฃุจุตุฑุชู†ูŠ ูŠูˆู… ุจู†ุชู…

1. By my life, if you had seen me the day we parted
With my eyes weeping for her, drop by drop

ูก. ู„ูŽุนูŽู…ุฑููŠูŽ ู„ูŽูˆ ุฃูŽุจุตูŽุฑุชูู†ูŠ ูŠูŽูˆู…ูŽ ุจูู†ุชูู…ู
ูˆูŽุนูŽูŠู†ูŠ ุจูุฌุงุฑูŠ ุฏูŽู…ุนูู‡ุง ุชูŽุชูŽุฑูŽู‚ุฑูŽู‚ู

2. And how I fared the morning after separation and longing
When I came to your abode, sleepless from intensity of passion

ูข. ูˆูŽูƒูŠููŽ ุบูŽุฏุงุฉูŽ ุงู„ุจูŽูŠู†ู ูˆูŽุฌุฏูŠ ูˆูŽูƒูŽูŠููŽ ุฅูุฐ
ู†ูŽุฃูŽุช ุฏุงุฑููƒูู… ุนูŽู† ุดูุฏู‘ูŽุฉู ุงู„ูˆูŽุฌุฏู ุขุฑูŽู‚ู

3. You would have known that my heart is suffering with recollection of you
And that I am captive in your bonds, fettered

ูฃ. ู„ูŽุฃูŽูŠู‚ูŽู†ุชู ุฃูŽู†ู‘ูŽ ุงู„ู‚ูŽู„ุจูŽ ุนุงู†ู ุจูุฐููƒุฑููƒูู…
ูˆูŽุฃูŽู†ู‘ูŠ ุฑูŽู‡ูŠู†ูŒ ููŠ ุญูุจุงู„ููƒูŽ ู…ูุซูŽู‚ู

4. Then the censures of the blamers drove me away, but she smiled
And said to her maid, โ€œListen, he is not rationalโ€

ูค. ููŽุตูŽุฏู‘ูŽุช ุตูุฏูˆุฏูŽ ุงู„ุฑูุฆู…ู ุซูู…ู‘ูŽ ุชูŽุจูŽุณู‘ูŽู…ูŽุช
ูˆูŽู‚ุงู„ูŽุช ู„ูุชูุฑุจูŽูŠู‡ุง ุงูุณู…ูŽุนุง ู„ูŽูŠุณูŽ ูŠูŽุฑููŽู‚ู

5. One maid said to her, โ€œHe is a benefactorโ€
โ€œAnd you in his eyes are covered in ragsโ€

ูฅ. ููŽู‚ุงู„ูŽุช ู„ูŽู‡ุง ุฅูุญุฏุงู‡ูู…ุง ู‡ููˆูŽ ู…ูุญุณูู†ูŒ
ูˆูŽุฃูŽู†ุชู ุจูู‡ู ููŠู…ุง ุชูŽุฑู‰ ุงู„ุนูŽูŠู†ู ุฃูŽุฎุฑูŽู‚ู

6. And the other said to her, โ€œSend him away with what he desires
For his passion, when he speaks, is evidentโ€

ูฆ. ูˆูŽู‚ุงู„ูŽุช ู„ูŽู‡ุง ุงู„ุฃูุฎุฑู‰ ุงูุฑุฌูุนูŠู‡ู ุจูู…ุง ุงูุดุชูŽู‡ู‰
ููŽุฅูู†ู‘ูŽ ู‡ูŽูˆุงู‡ู ุจูŽูŠู‘ูู†ูŒ ุญูŠู†ูŽ ูŠูŽู†ุทูู‚ู

7. They interceded for me when they saw my tears
And my heart took precautions against them, fearing for them

ูง. ุดูŽููŽุนู†ูŽ ุฅูู„ูŽูŠู‡ุง ุญูŠู†ูŽ ุฃูŽุจุตูŽุฑู†ูŽ ุนูŽุจุฑูŽุชูŠ
ูˆูŽู‚ูŽู„ุจูŠ ุญูุฐุงุฑูŽ ุงู„ุนูŽูŠู†ู ู…ูู†ู‡ูู†ู‘ูŽ ู…ูุดููู‚ู

8. When the night had passed, her maid said
โ€œI think before the living awaken, it's best to goโ€

ูจ. ููŽู„ูŽู…ู‘ุง ุชูŽู‚ูŽุถู‘ู‰ ุงู„ู„ูŽูŠู„ู ู‚ุงู„ูŽุช ููŽุชุงุชูู‡ุง
ุฃูŽุฑู‰ ู‚ูŽุจู„ูŽ ุฃูŽู† ูŠูŽุณุชูŠู‚ูุธูŽ ุงู„ุญูŽูŠู‘ู ุฃูŽุฑููŽู‚ู

9. And she bit her thumb and drew away, saying
โ€œSurely your evil will overtake youโ€

ูฉ. ูˆูŽุนูŽุถู‘ูŽุช ุนูŽู„ู‰ ุฅูุจู‡ุงู…ูู‡ุง ูˆูŽุชูŽู†ูŽูƒู‘ูŽุจูŽุช
ู‚ูŽุฑูŠุจุงู‹ ูˆูŽู‚ุงู„ูŽุช ุฅูู†ู‘ูŽ ุดูŽุฑู‘ูŽูƒูŽ ู…ูู„ุญูู‚ู

10. You make clear a love for us and express features
And a face made beautiful by the radiance of loveliness

ูกู . ุชูุจูŠู†ู ู‡ูŽูˆู‰ู‹ ู…ูู†ู‘ุง ูˆูŽุชูุจุฏูŠ ุดูŽู…ุงุฆูู„ุงู‹
ูˆูŽูˆูŽุฌู‡ุงู‹ ู„ูŽู‡ู ู…ูู† ุจูŽู‡ุฌูŽุฉู ุงู„ุญูุณู†ู ุฑูŽูˆู†ูŽู‚ู

11. She composed for her from the quintessence of love and passion
Anew over the traces of previous campsites no longer frequented

ูกูก. ููŽุฃูŽู„ููŽุช ู„ูŽู‡ุง ู…ูู† ุฎุงู„ูุตู ุงู„ูˆูุฏู‘ู ูˆูŽุงู„ู‡ูŽูˆู‰
ุฌูŽุฏูŠุฏุงู‹ ุนูŽู„ู‰ ุดูŽุญุทู ุงู„ู†ูŽูˆู‰ ู„ูŽูŠุณูŽ ูŠูŽุฎู„ูŽู‚ู

12. To a fervent lover, more passionate for her than his own spirit
On a field of chosen friends not to be equaled

ูกูข. ู„ูŽุฏู‰ ุนุงุดูู‚ู ุฃูŽุญู…ู‰ ู„ูŽู‡ุง ู…ูู† ููุคุงุฏูู‡ู
ุนูŽู„ู‰ ู…ูŽุณุฑูŽุญู ุฐูŠ ุตูŽููˆูŽุฉู ู„ุง ูŠูุฑูŽู†ู‘ูŽู‚ู

13. Passion had divested him of it, so he had no passion for others
Wherever his love inclined, suspended

ูกูฃ. ุญูŽู„ุงู‡ุง ุงู„ู‡ูŽูˆู‰ ู…ูู†ู‡ู ููŽู„ูŽูŠุณูŽ ู„ูุบูŽูŠุฑูู‡ุง
ุจูู‡ู ู…ูู† ู‡ูŽูˆุงู‡ู ุญูŽูŠุซู ู†ูŽุญู‘ู‰ ู…ูุนูŽู„ู‘ูŽู‚ู

14. The morning after separation, his eyes almost speak
With his tears, if eyes could speak

ูกูค. ุชูŽูƒุงุฏู ุบูŽุฏุงุฉูŽ ุงู„ุจูŽูŠู†ู ุชูŽู†ุทูู‚ู ุนูŽูŠู†ูู‡ู
ุจูุนูŽุจุฑูŽุชูู‡ู ู„ูŽูˆ ูƒุงู†ูŽุชู ุงู„ุนูŽูŠู†ู ุชูŽู†ุทูู‚ู