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My heart awoke, now sober and remorseful

ุฃุตุจุญ ุงู„ู‚ู„ุจ ู‚ุฏ ุตุญุง ูˆุฃู†ุงุจุง

1. My heart awoke, now sober and remorseful,
Forsaking vanity, youth, music and revelry,

ูก. ุฃูŽุตุจูŽุญูŽ ุงู„ู‚ูŽู„ุจู ู‚ูŽุฏ ุตูŽุญุง ูˆูŽุฃูŽู†ุงุจุง
ู‡ูŽุฌูŽุฑูŽ ุงู„ู„ูŽู‡ูˆูŽ ูˆูŽุงู„ุตูุจุง ูˆูŽุงู„ุฑูŽุจุงุจุง

2. I used to love her company, but she denied me,
The sin of another yet her grievance was never allayed,

ูข. ูƒูู†ุชู ุฃูŽู‡ูˆู‰ ูˆูุตุงู„ูŽู‡ุง ููŽุชูŽุฌูŽู†ู‘ูŽุช
ุฐูŽู†ุจูŽ ุบูŽูŠุฑูŠ ููŽู…ุง ุชูŽู…ูŽู„ู‘ู ุงู„ุนูุชุงุจุง

3. So I overcame my passion for good senseโ€™s sake
When my temples turned white through sorrow's ashen pall,

ูฃ. ููŽุชูŽุนูŽุฒู‘ูŽูŠุชู ุนูŽู† ู‡ูŽูˆุงู‡ุง ู„ูุฑูุดุฏูŠ
ุญูู†ูŽ ู„ุงุญูŽ ุงู„ู‚ูŽุฐุงู„ู ู…ูู†ู‘ูŠ ููŽุดุงุจุง

4. Then she sent me a message, seeking reunion:
โ€œGodโ€™s rule,โ€ she said, โ€œhow could one not repent?โ€

ูค. ุจูŽุนูŽุซูŽุช ู„ูู„ูˆูุตุงู„ู ู†ูŽุญูˆูŠ ูˆูŽู‚ุงู„ูŽุช
ุฅูู†ู‘ูŽ ู„ูู„ู‘ูŽู‡ู ุฏูŽุฑู‘ูŽู‡ู ูƒูŽูŠููŽ ุชุงุจุง

5. Who is the go-between to whom truth is revealed?
Today she shuns me more than ever.

ูฅ. ู…ูŽู† ุฑูŽุณูˆู„ูŒ ุฅูู„ูŽูŠู‡ู ูŠูŽุนู„ูŽู…ู ุญูŽู‚ู‘ุงู‹
ุฃูŽุฌู…ูŽุนูŽ ุงู„ูŠูŽูˆู…ูŽ ู‡ูุฌุฑูŽุฉู‹ ูˆูŽุงูุฌุชูู†ุงุจุง

6. Had I not weaned him from the one we loved,
I would not have abandoned wine.

ูฆ. ุฅูู† ู„ูŽู…ู ุฃูŽุตุฑููู‡ู ู„ูู„ู‘ูŽุฐูŠ ู‚ูŽุฏ ู‡ูŽูˆูŽูŠู†ุง
ุนูŽู† ู‡ูŽูˆุงู‡ู ููŽู„ุง ุฃูŽุณูŽุบุชู ุงู„ุดูŽุฑุงุจุง

7. She sent a messenger not to the devoted lover
But one who found rewardโ€”and Iโ€™ll not leave reward.

ูง. ุจูŽุนูŽุซูŽุช ู†ูŽุญูˆูŽ ุนุงุดูู‚ู ุบูŽูŠุฑู ุณุงู„ู
ู…ูŽุน ุซูŽูˆุงุจู ููŽู„ุง ุนูŽุฏูู…ุชู ุซูŽูˆุงุจุง

8. With words that blamed a passion-maddened manโ€”
A lover whose heartache left him mute.

ูจ. ุจูุญูŽุฏูŠุซู ููŠู‡ู ู…ูŽู„ุงู…ูŒ ู„ูุตูŽุจู‘ู
ู…ูˆุฌูŽุนู ุงู„ู‚ูŽู„ุจู ุนุงุดูู‚ู ููŽุฃูŽุฌุงุจุง

9. He came to her straightaway, running,
Disobeying, in his love for song, good company.

ูฉ. ููŽุฃูŽุชุงู‡ุง ู„ูู„ุญูŠู†ู ูŠูŽุนุฏูˆ ุณูŽุฑูŠุนุงู‹
ูˆูŽุนูŽุตู‰ ููŠ ู‡ูŽูˆู‰ ุงู„ุฑูŽุจุงุจู ุงู„ุตูŽุญุงุจุง

10. I disobeyed good advice about you, I confess,
As my friend warned me not to doubt.

ูกู . ูƒูู†ุชู ุฃูŽุนุตูŠ ุงู„ู†ูŽุตูŠุญูŽ ููŠูƒู ู…ูู†ูŽ ุงู„ูˆูŽุฌ
ุฏู ูˆูŽุฃูŽู†ู‡ู‰ ุงู„ุฎูŽู„ูŠู„ูŽ ุฃูŽู† ูŠูŽุฑุชุงุจุง

11. So this morning I was visited with something
That shook my being and made me a marvel.

ูกูก. ููŽุงูุจุชูู„ูŠุชู ุงู„ุบูŽุฏุงุฉูŽ ู…ูู†ู‡ู ุจูุดูŽูŠุกู
ุณูŽู„ู‘ูŽ ุฌูุณู…ูŠ ูˆูŽุนูุฏุชู ุดูŽูŠุฆุงู‹ ุนูุฌุงุจุง