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Atiq said when I complained of my youth

ูŠู‚ูˆู„ ุนุชูŠู‚ ุฅุฐ ุดูƒูˆุช ุตุจุงุจุชูŠ

1. Atiq said when I complained of my youth
And an ailment from my heart made itself felt:

ูก. ูŠูŽู‚ูˆู„ู ุนูŽุชูŠู‚ูŒ ุฅูุฐ ุดูŽูƒูŽูˆุชู ุตูŽุจุงุจูŽุชูŠ
ูˆูŽุจูŽูŠู‘ูŽู†ูŽ ุฏุงุกูŒ ู…ูู† ููุคุงุฏูŠ ู…ูุฎุงู…ูุฑู

2. โ€œIs it right that if the house of the beloved moves away
Or a rope breaks that your heart should fly off?

ูข. ุฃูŽุญูŽู‚ู‘ุงู‹ ู„ูŽุฆูู† ุฏุงุฑู ุงู„ุฑูŽุจุงุจู ุชูŽุจุงุนูŽุฏูŽุช
ุฃูŽูˆู ุงูู†ุจูŽุชู‘ูŽ ุญูŽุจู„ูŒ ุฃูŽู†ู‘ูŽ ู‚ูŽู„ุจูŽูƒูŽ ุทุงุฆูุฑู

3. Be sensible - lovers have come to their senses and left
Passion, while men continue with stratagems.

ูฃ. ุฃูŽููู‚ ู‚ูŽุฏ ุฃูŽูุงู‚ูŽ ุงู„ุนุงุดูู‚ูˆู†ูŽ ูˆูŽูุงุฑูŽู‚ูˆุง ุงู„
ู‡ูŽูˆู‰ ูˆูŽุงูุณุชูŽู…ูŽุฑู‘ูŽุช ุจูุงู„ุฑูุฌุงู„ู ุงู„ู…ูŽุฑุงุฆูุฑู

4. Control your heart and keep your honor intact
For fate alone brings the beloved closer or pushes away.

ูค. ุฒูŽุนู ุงู„ู‚ูŽู„ุจูŽ ูˆูŽุงูุณุชูŽุจู‚ู ุงู„ุญูŽูŠุงุกูŽ ููŽุฅูู†ู‘ูŽู…ุง
ุชูุจุงุนูุฏู ุฃูŽูˆ ุชูุฏู†ูŠ ุงู„ุฑูŽุจุงุจูŽ ุงู„ู…ูŽู‚ุงุฏูุฑู

5. If you have hung on to the beloved, donโ€™t listen
To the words of one who makes a show or pretends.

ูฅ. ููŽุฅูู† ูƒูู†ุชูŽ ุนูู„ู‘ูู‚ุชูŽ ุงู„ุฑูŽุจุงุจูŽ ููŽู„ุง ุชูŽูƒูู†
ุฃูŽุญุงุฏูŠุซูŽ ู…ูŽู† ูŠูŽุจุฏูˆ ูˆูŽู…ูŽู† ู‡ููˆูŽ ุญุงุถูุฑู

6. Forget her love and imagine your intimacy with her
And company like one you donโ€™t keep company with.

ูฆ. ุฃูŽู…ูุช ุญูุจู‘ูŽู‡ุง ูˆูŽุงูุฌุนูŽู„ ู‚ูŽุฏูŠู…ูŽ ูˆูุตุงู„ูู‡ุง
ูˆูŽุนูุดุฑูŽุชูู‡ุง ุฃูŽู…ุซุงู„ูŽ ู…ูŽู† ู„ุง ุชูุนุงุดูุฑู

7. Consider her like something that was not
Or someone the tombs have made disappear.

ูง. ูˆูŽู‡ูŽุจู‡ุง ูƒูŽุดูŽูŠุกู ู„ูŽู… ูŠูŽูƒูู† ุฃูŽูˆ ูƒูŽู†ุงุฒูุญู
ุจูู‡ู ุงู„ุฏุงุฑู ุฃูŽูˆ ู…ูŽู† ุบูŽูŠู‘ูŽุจูŽุชู‡ู ุงู„ู…ูŽู‚ุงุจูุฑู

8. If you donโ€™t do this - and you wonโ€™t and canโ€™t
Or accept advice from one giving counsel -

ูจ. ููŽุฅูู† ุฃูŽู†ุชูŽ ู„ูŽู… ุชูŽูุนูŽู„ ูˆูŽู„ูŽุณุชูŽ ุจููุงุนูู„ู
ูˆูŽู„ุง ู‚ุงุจูู„ู ู†ูุตุญุงู‹ ู„ูู…ูŽู† ู‡ููˆูŽ ุฒุงุฌูุฑู

9. Then donโ€™t disgrace yourself by going to her
And indulging this heart when you can lead.

ูฉ. ููŽู„ุง ุชูŽูุชูŽุถูุญ ุนูŽูŠู†ุงู‹ ุฃูŽุชูŽูŠุชูŽ ุงู„ู‘ูŽุฐูŠ ุชูŽุฑู‰
ูˆูŽุทุงูˆูŽุนุชูŽ ู‡ูŽุฐุง ุงู„ู‚ูŽู„ุจูŽ ุฅูุฐ ุฃูŽู†ุชูŽ ุณุงุฏูุฑู

10. I didnโ€™t stop until people frowned at my visits
And eyes watched me with disapproval.โ€

ูกู . ูˆูŽู…ุง ุฒูู„ุชู ุญูŽุชู‘ู‰ ุงูุณุชูŽู†ูƒูŽุฑูŽ ุงู„ู†ุงุณู ู…ูŽุฏุฎูŽู„ูŠ
ูˆูŽุญูŽุชู‘ู‰ ุชูŽุฑุงุกูŽุชู†ูŠ ุงู„ุนููŠูˆู†ู ุงู„ู†ูŽูˆุงุธูุฑู