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Her cheeks white as the shining moon,

وبيضاء العوارض قابلتها

1. Her cheeks white as the shining moon,
Met by one whose hair was touched with grey like mine,

١. وبيضاء العَوارِض قابلتْها
شَبيهتُها السَّميةُ من مَشيِبي

2. She glanced not his way but stared in bitter doubt,
As if my presence caused her great dismay.

٢. فظَلَّت لا تَرُدّ الطَّرْفَ عنْها
تلاحظُها ملاحظةَ المُريب

3. When she exclaimed, “You've aged!” I said “Not I,
This is but the dust of life’s long road.”

٣. وقالتْ لي أَشِبتَ فقلتُ كلا
ولكنْ هذِه زَبَدُ الخُطوب

4. Your abandonment has caused the most hurt,
Your sins, not mine, have bred this distance curst.

٤. وهَجْرُك آكَدُ الأسبابِ فيها
فمُوجِبها ذنُوبك لا ذنوبِي

5. Said she, “I did not leave for any fault.”
How can you bear this burden of self-blame?

٥. فقالت لي هجرتُك لا لعيبٍ
فكيف على الكثير منَ العيوب