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I spent a night with Layla, and between us

ุฎู„ูˆุช ุจู„ูŠู„ู‰ ุฐุงุช ูŠูˆู… ูˆุจูŠู†ู†ุง

1. I spent a night with Layla, and between us
Was a conversation flowing like pure honey.

ูก. ุฎู„ูˆุชู ุจู„ูŠู„ู‰ ุฐุงุชูŽ ูŠูˆู…ู ูˆุจูŠู†ู†ุง
ุญุฏูŠุซูŒ ูƒู…ุง ุงู†ู’ู‡ูŽู„ู‘ูŽ ุงู„ููŽุฑูŠุฏู ู…ู† ุงู„ุณู‘ูู…ู’ุทู

2. She was captivated by musk, spreading its essence
On the like of it from a smooth, young cheek.

ูข. ูˆู‚ุฏ ุฃููˆู„ุนูŽุชู’ ุจุงู„ู…ุณูƒ ุชูู„ูู‚ู‰ ู…ูุฐูŽุงุจูŽู‡ู
ุนู„ู‰ ู…ุซู„ู‡ ู…ู† ุนุงุฑุถู ุญุงู„ูƒู ุณูŽุจู’ุท

3. She combed it through, till a single white hair
Clung in the teeth of her comb.

ูฃ. ูˆุซูŽู†ู‘ูŽุชู‡ ุจุงู„ุชู‘ูŽุณู’ุฑูŠุญ ุญุชู‰ ุชูŽุนู„ู‘ูŽู‚ุชู’
ู„ู‡ุง ุดูŽุนู’ุฑุฉูŒ ุจูŠุถุงุกู ููŠ ุณูู†ู‘ูŽุฉ ุงู„ู…ุดุท

4. It flashed out at her, changing her mood
As she tried to grab it, beyond her grasp.

ูค. ูู„ุงุญูŽ ุจู‡ุง ู…ู†ู‡ุง ุนู„ู‰ู‘ูŽ ุชูŽุบูŠู‘ูุฑูŒ
ุฅุฐุง ุถุจุทุชู’ู‡ู ุฌูŽู„ู‘ูŽ ู‚ูŽุฏู’ุฑุง ุนู† ุงู„ุถุจุท

5. Sighing deeply, repeating her breath
Hotter than embers blown in the fire, she said:

ูฅ. ูˆุฏุงู… ู„ู‡ุง ููŠ ุงู„ุญุงู„ ููŽุฑู’ุทู ุชูŽู†ู‡ู‘ูุฏู
ูˆุชูƒุฑุงุฑู ุฃู†ูุงุณู ุฃุญุฑู‘ูŽ ู…ู† ุงู„ู†ู‘ููู’ุท

6. โ€œYouโ€™re getting old,โ€ I said โ€œItโ€™s just a line
That showed itself; pages arenโ€™t made ugly by lines.โ€

ูฆ. ูู‚ุงู„ุช ุฃุดูŠุจูŒ ู‚ู„ุช ุฎูŽุทู‘ู ุตุญูŠูุฉู
ุชูŽุจุฏู‘ูŽู‰ ูˆู…ุง ุฒุงู† ุงู„ุตุญุงุฆููŽ ูƒุงู„ุฎุท

7. She said โ€œBy my life, you speak true; theyโ€™re
Letters, no doubt, but they trace out steps.โ€

ูง. ูู‚ุงู„ุช ู„ูŽุนูŽู…ู’ุฑูู‰ ู‚ุฏ ุตุฏู‚ุชูŽ ุจุฃู†ู‡ุง
ุญุฑูˆููŒ ุจู„ุง ุดูƒู‘ู ูˆู„ูƒู†ู‡ุง ุฎูŽุทู‰