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I said, when he wept one evening and called out,

ู‚ู„ุช ู„ู…ุง ุจูƒู‰ ุนุดูŠุฉ ู†ุงุฏูŠุช

1. I said, when he wept one evening and called out,
โ€œThe turns of fate promise tomorrow is the day of your return.โ€

ูก. ู‚ูู„ุชู ู„ู…ุง ุจูƒู‰ ุนูŽุดูŠู‘ูŽุฉูŽ ู†ุงุฏูŽูŠ
ุชู ุตูุฑูˆููŽ ุงู„ุฑู‘ูŽุฏู‰ ุบุฏูŒ ูŠูˆู…ู ูˆูŽุนุฏููƒ

2. Time was unjust then became fair, so it made you weep
as I wept from your absence.

ูข. ุนูŽุฏู„ูŽ ุงู„ุฏู‘ูŽู‡ุฑู ุจูŽุนุฏูŽ ุฌูŽูˆุฑู ููŽุฃูŽุจูƒุง
ูƒูŽ ู„ุชูŽุจูƒูŠ ูƒูŽู…ุง ุจูŽูƒูŠุชู ู„ุจูุนุฏููƒ

3. Give me the wine that quenched your eyelidsโ€™ thirst
and measure my drinking by the drinking of your cheek.

ูฃ. ูุงุณู‚ูู†ูŠ ุงู„ุฑุงุญูŽ ุณูŽู‚ูŠูŽ ุฃูŽุฌูุงู†ููƒูŽ ุงู„ุฏู‘ูŽู…
ุนูŽ ูˆู‚ุงูŠูุณ ุดุฑุจูŠ ุฅูู„ู‰ ุดุฑุจู ุฎูŽุฏู‘ููƒ