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The one who apologizes for his misdeeds to my heart

ومعتذر العذار إلى فؤادي

1. The one who apologizes for his misdeeds to my heart
For an earlier sin from his two eyelids

١. ومُعتَذرِ العِذار إلى فُؤادي
لجرمٍ سابقٍ من مُقلَتَيهِ

2. And how often have I turned away from him, yet the greenness of his tender cheeks
Turned away from my turning away from him

٢. وكَم أعرَضتُ عَنه فأعرضَت بي
عن الإعراضِ خُضرةُ عارِضَيهِ

3. And when I said poetry seeks
My heart for deliverance, he sought it for me

٣. ولَمَّا قُلتُ إنَّ الشعر يَسعَى
لقَلبي في الخَلاصِ سَعَى عَليهِ