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He reaped what he reaped then left,

ุฌู†ู‰ ู…ุง ุฌู†ู‰ ูˆุงู†ุตุฑู

1. He reaped what he reaped then left,
Denied at first then confessed,

ูก. ุฌูŽู†ู‰ ู…ุง ุฌูŽู†ู‰ ูˆุงู†ุตูŽุฑูŽู
ูˆุฃู†ูƒุฑูŽ ุซู…ู‘ูŽ ุงุนุชุฑูŽู

2. Thinking the short poem would prevent indulgence,
Yet you have a hint from him,

ูข. ูˆุธู†ู‘ูŽ ุจุฃู†ู‘ูŽ ุงู„ู‚ูุตุง
ุตูŽ ูŠูŽู…ู†ูŽุนู ู…ู†ู‡ ุงู„ุชู‘ูŽุฑูŽู

3. And of what he reaped, a hint,
So ask his cheek, why did it show,

ูฃ. ูˆุนู†ุฏูƒูŽ ู…ูู† ุทูŽุฑููู‡ู
ูˆู…ู…ู‘ูŽุง ุฌูŽู†ุงู‡ ุทูŽุฑูŽู

4. And when it showed, why did it stop,
For he thought itโ€™s acceptable

ูค. ูุณูŽู„ ุตูุฏุบูŽู‡ ู„ูู… ุจูŽุฏุง
ูˆู„ู…ู‘ูŽุง ุจูŽุฏุง ู„ูู… ูˆูŽู‚ูŽู

5. To exceed, so he veered,
If only he walked his walk

ูฅ. ูˆูƒุงู†ูŽ ุนูŽู„ู‰ ุฃู†ู‘ูŽู‡
ูŠูŽุฌูˆุฒู ุงู„ู…ูŽุฏู‰ ูุงู†ุนูŽุทูŽู

6. So heโ€™d be fair and take revenge,
And time, his age got old,

ูฆ. ูˆุฃูŽู„ุง ุณูŽุนู‰ ุณูŽุนูŠูŽู‡ู
ูุฃู†ุตูŽููŽู†ุง ูˆุงู†ุชูŽุตูŽู

7. Exposing his senility,
He went with the ways of dew,

ูง. ูˆุฏูŽู‡ุฑูŒ ุนูŽู„ุง ุณูู†ู‘ูู‡
ูุจุงู†ูŽ ุนู„ูŽูŠู‡ ุงู„ุฎูŽุฑูŽู

8. Leaving nothing but pretense,
Had it not been, it wouldnโ€™t have been,

ูจ. ู…ูŽุถู‰ ุจุทูุจุงุน ุงู„ู†ู‘ูŽุฏู‰
ูู„ู… ูŠูุจู‚ู ุฅู„ุง ุงู„ูƒูู„ูŽู

9. For it to have a successor, O successor!

ูฉ. ูˆู„ูŽูˆ ู„ูŽู… ุชูŽูƒูู† ู„ูŽู… ูŠูƒูู†
ู„ู‡ุง ุฎูŽู„ููŒ ูŠุง ุฎูŽู„ูŽู