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I wrote while my longing dictated sadness,

كتبت وشوقي يملي أسى

1. I wrote while my longing dictated sadness,
A secret of love though silence was great,

١. كَتَبْتُ وشَوْقِيَ يُملِي أسىً
سَريرةَ حُبٍّ وَشاها الجَلَمْ

2. Had I made for her a line other than it,
The pen would have blazed between my hands

٢. ولو رُمْتُ خَطّاً لَها بِسِواهُ
تَلهَّبَ بينَ يَدَيَّ القَلَمْ