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I have a wounded liver, who will buy

ولي كبد مقروحة من يبيعني

1. I have a wounded liver, who will buy
It from me with a liver that has no wounds?

١. وَلِي كبدٌ مَقْرُوحَةٌ مَنْ يَبيعُني
بِهَا كَبِداً لَيْسَتْ بِذاتِ قُروحِ

2. People refused and declined to buy it
Who would buy something defective with something sound?

٢. أَبَى النَّاسُ وَيْبَ النَّاسِ أَنْ يشْتَرُونَها
وَمَنْ يشْتَرِي ذا عِلَّة بِصَحيحِ

3. Do I moan from the longing in my heart
With the moaning of one choking on drink?

٣. أئنُّ من الشوق الذي في جوانحي
أنينَ غصيصٍ بالشراب قريحِ