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I complained of my love to my friend

ุดูƒูˆุช ุฅูู„ู‰ ุจุฏุฑูŠ ู‡ูˆุงู‡ ูู‚ุงู„ ู„ูŠ

1. I complained of my love to my friend,
Who said to me, "Do you not see

ูก. ุดูƒูˆุช ุฅูู„ู‰ ุจุฏุฑูŠ ู‡ูˆุงู‡ ูู‚ุงู„ ู„ูŠ
ุฃู„ุณุช ุชุฑู‰ ุจุฏุฑ ุงู„ุณู…ุงุก ุงู„ุฐูŠ ูŠุณุฑูŠ

2. The moon, that sails through heaven's skies?"
I said "Yes." He said "Then seek it,

ูข. ูู‚ู„ุช ุจู„ู‰ ู‚ุงู„ ุงู„ุชู…ุณู‡ู ูุฅู†ู‡
ู†ุธูŠุฑูŠ ูˆุดูุจู‡ูŠ ููŠ ุนู„ูˆูŠ ูˆููŠ ู‚ุฏุฑูŠ

3. For it is like me in stature and worth."
"And if you obtain it, know you have obtained me.

ูฃ. ูุฅู† ู†ู„ุชู‡ู ูุงุนู„ู… ุจุฃู†ูƒ ู†ุงุฆู„ูŠ
ูˆุฅู† ู„ู… ุชู†ู„ู‡ู ูุงุจุบ ุฃู…ุฑุงู‹ ุณูˆู‰ ุฃู…ุฑูŠ

4. But if you fail, then set your sight beyond me."
Thus both moons are hard for me to graspโ€”

ูค. ููƒุงู† ูƒู„ุง ุงู„ุจุฏุฑูŠู† ุตุนุจุงู‹ ู…ุฑุงู…ูู‡ู
ู„ูŠูŽ ุงู„ูˆูŠู„ ู…ู† ุจุฏุฑ ุงู„ุณู…ุงุก ูˆู…ู† ุจุฏุฑูŠ