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A poem its author disliked

ู‚ุตูŠุฏุฉ ูƒุฑู‡ุง ู…ุซู‚ูู‡ุง

1. A poem its author disliked
When you were cultivated at leisure, my friend

ูก. ู‚ุตูŠุฏุฉูŒ ูƒุฑู‘ูŽู‡ุง ู…ูุซู‚ู‘ููู‡ุง
ุนู„ูŠูƒูŽ ุฅุฐ ุซูู‚ู‘ููุชู’ ุนู„ู‰ ู…ูŽู‡ูŽู„ู

2. Time rushed it from its grooming
So it came, its back sore with exertion

ูข. ุฃุนุฌู„ู‡ ุงู„ูˆู‚ุชู ุนู† ุฑูŠุงุถุชู‡ุง
ูุฃู‚ุจู„ุชู’ ุฑูŠู‘ุถุงู‹ ุนู„ู‰ ุนุฌู„ู

3. Its shoulders weighed down
I did not shy from imposing it on you

ูฃ. ุซู… ุงุณุชุฑุงุถุชู’ ูุฌุงุก ู…ุฑูƒูŽุจูู‡ุง
ู…ูู…ู’ุชูŽู‡ูŽุฏูŽ ุงู„ุธู‡ุฑู ู…ูุฑุฏููŽ ุงู„ูƒูŽููŽู„ู

4. Or mend its imperfections
For I know you donโ€™t reproach

ูค. ู„ู… ุฃุญุชุดู…ู’ ูƒุฑู‘ูŽู‡ุง ุนู„ูŠูƒ ูˆู„ุง
ุณุฏู‘ูŽุฏ ู…ู†ู‡ุง ู…ูˆุงุถุนูŽ ุงู„ุฎู„ู„ู

5. What I improve of my work
And one like me does not sleep amid flaws

ูฅ. ู„ุฃู†ู†ูŠ ุนุงู„ู…ูŒ ุจุฃู†ูƒ ู„ุง
ุชุนุชูุจู ููŠู…ุง ุฃุตู„ุญุชู ู…ู† ุนู…ู„ูŠ

6. In praising his praiseworthy patron
Much less so for one of famed repute

ูฆ. ูˆู„ูŠุณ ู…ุซู„ูŠ ูŠู†ุงู…ู ุนู† ุฎูŽู„ูŽู„ู
ููŠ ู…ุฏุญ ู…ู…ุฏูˆุญูู‡ ูˆู„ุง ุฒู„ูŽู„ู

7. And choice virtues
Poetry is not valid if plagiarized

ูง. ู„ุง ุณูŠู…ุง ููŠ ู…ุฏูŠุญ ู…ู…ุชุฏูŽุญู
ู…ุดุชู‡ุฑ ุงู„ุฐูƒุฑ ุณุงุฆุฑ ุงู„ู…ุซู„ู

8. It is forbidden to praise any plagiarizer
So let the prince accept it again

ูจ. ูˆุงู„ุดุนุฑ ู…ุง ูƒุงู† ุบูŠุฑ ู…ูู†ู’ุชูŽุญูŽู„ู
ูŠูŽุญู’ุฑูู…ู ููŠ ู…ุฏุญ ูƒู„ ู…ูู†ู’ุชูŽุญูู„ู

9. Despite the burden of repeating it
And let the prince indulge his servant

ูฉ. ููŽู„ู’ูŠูŽุณู’ุชูŽุนูุฏู’ู‡ูŽุง ุงู„ุฃู…ูŠุฑู ุซุงู†ูŠุฉู‹
ุนู„ู‰ ุงู„ุฐูŠ ููŠ ุงู„ู…ุนุงุฏู ู…ู† ุซูู‚ู„ู

10. Though it weigh with an unbearable weight

ูกู . ูˆู„ูŠุญุชู…ู„ ุนุจุฏูŽู‡ ุงู„ุฃู…ูŠุฑู ูˆุฅู†
ุซู‚ู‘ูŽู„ูŽ ุชุซู‚ูŠู„ูŽ ุบูŠุฑู ู…ุญุชู…ู„ู