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I sought you out, though I make no request

ู‚ุตุฏุช ุฅู„ูŠูƒ ู„ุง ุฃุฏู„ูŠ ุจุดูŠุก

1. I sought you out, though I make no request
Except what I know is your kindnessโ€™ behest

ูก. ู‚ุตุฏุชู ุฅู„ูŠูƒ ู„ุง ุฃูุฏู’ู„ูŠ ุจุดูŠุกู
ุฃุฑู‰ ุญูŽู‚ู‘ููŠ ุนู„ูŠูƒ ุจู‡ ุนุธูŠู…ุง

2. Not to gain your praises, though worthy youโ€™d be
But so youโ€™d remain the noble youth I see

ูข. ุณููˆู‰ ุงู„ูƒุฑู… ุงู„ุฐูŠ ุฃุนุฑู‚ู’ุชูŽ ููŠู‡
ูˆุญุณุจูŠ ุฃู† ุชูƒูˆู† ูุชู‰ ูƒุฑูŠู…ุง

3. I called you those names I know you by
Hoping to move your heart thereby

ูฃ. ูˆู„ู… ุฃู…ุฏุญูƒูŽ ุฅุชุญุงูุงู‹ ุจู…ุฏุญู
ูƒูู‰ ู…ุฏุญูŒ ุบูุฐูŠุชูŽ ุจู‡ ูุทูŠู…ุง

4. No reward but the metre nicely wrought
For the poem is not a debt to be bought

ูค. ูˆู„ูƒู†ู‘ููŠ ุฏุนูˆุชููƒ ููŠ ุณูุคุงู„ูŠ
ุจุฃุณู…ุงุกู ุฏูุนูŠุชูŽ ุจู‡ุง ู‚ุฏูŠู…ุง

5. Yet I know you see it as duty bound
One worthy soul knowing another found

ูฅ. ูˆู„ู… ุฃุฑ ูƒููู’ุกูŽ ุณูŽู…ู’ุนูƒูŽ ู…ู† ูƒู„ุงู…ูŠ
ุณูˆู‰ ุงู„ู…ูŽูˆู’ุฒูˆู†ู ูˆุฒู†ุงู‹ ู…ูุณุชู‚ูŠู…ุง

6. If my thoughts you approve and admire
Your flashing smiles my hopes will fire

ูฆ. ูˆู„ุณุชู ุฃุฑู‰ ุซูˆุงุจูŽ ุงู„ุดุนุฑ ุฏูŽูŠู’ู†ุงู‹
ุนู„ูŠูƒ ูˆู„ุง ุฃุฑู‰ ู†ูู’ุณูŠ ุบุฑูŠู…ุง

7. If fate keeps us apart and blessings hide
Still I'll think you lack malice inside

ูง. ูˆู„ูƒู†ู‘ููŠ ุฃุฑุงูƒ ุชุฑุงู‡ ุญู‚ู‘ูŽุงู‹
ู„ู…ุฌุฏูƒ ูˆุงู„ูˆุณูŠู…ู ูŠุฑู‰ ุงู„ูˆุณูŠู…ุง

8. The rain cloud that passes one land in a sweep
May drench the next in downpour deep

ูจ. ูุฅู†ู’ ุชูŽูƒู ุนู†ุฏ ุชุฃู…ูŠู„ูŠ ูˆุธูŽู†ู‘ููŠ
ููƒู… ุตุฏู‘ูู‚ู’ุชูŽ ุจุงุฑู‚ูƒูŽ ุงู„ู…ุดูŠู…ุง

9. God willing, strip bare one tract of land
While clothing another in blossoms grand

ูฉ. ูˆุฅู† ุนุงู‚ูŽ ุงู„ู‚ุถุงุกู ู†ุฏุงูƒ ุนู†ูŠ
ูู„ุณุชู ุฃุฑุงูƒูŽ ููŠ ู…ูŽู†ู’ุนููŠ ู…ูู„ูŠู…ุง

ูกู . ูˆู…ุง ุบูŽูŠู’ุซูŒ ุฅุฐุง ู…ุง ุงุฌุชุงุฒูŽ ุฃุฑุถุงู‹
ุบู„ู‰ ุฃูุฎู’ุฑู‰ ุจู…ูุนู’ุชูŽุฏู‘ู ู„ุฆูŠู…ุง

ูกูก. ุจุฅุฐู† ุงู„ู„ู‡ ูŠูุนู’ุฑููŠ ู…ุชู† ุฃุฑุถู
ูˆูŠูƒุณูˆ ุฃูุฎุชูŽู‡ุง ุงู„ุฒู‡ุฑูŽ ุงู„ุนู…ูŠู…ุง