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When I saw poetry becoming dormant

لما رأيت الشعر أصبح خاملا

1. When I saw poetry becoming dormant
I revived it with an outspoken youth

١. لما رأيت الشعر أصبح خاملاً
نبَّهتُهُ بفتىً أغرَّ صريحِ

2. I did not praise him for a quality I saw
In his glory, but rather guided it with praise

٢. لم أمتدحْه لخَلَّةٍ أبصرتُها
في مجده فسددتها بمديحِ