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I saw the gathering of the palm tree's fruit

رأيت التقاط جنى نخلة

1. I saw the gathering of the palm tree's fruit
When it falls though the palm does not shake it off

١. رأيتُ التقاط جنى نخلة
إذا ساقطته ولم ترقَها

2. Would your palm be hurt by its thorns
Though it does not give it its due right

٢. أكَنَّ لكفك من شوكها
وإن هي لم توفها حقها

3. The palm tree did well when it lowered
Its sustenance onto an outstretched palm

٣. لقد أحسنت نخلة أنزلت
على كف ممتاحها رزقها

4. Its thorns did not scratch the palm
Nor did its spikes scratch the sole

٤. وما جشمت كفه شوكها
ولا جشمت رجله سُحقها